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for Number Three

by Myyahele

person Yondaime
schedule July 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This was insanely amazing. I love your way of writing. I hope you do more. ;____; I miss FE fics. Rath/Wil is one of my favs.
person aisen
schedule August 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hee ♥ this is adorable ♥ I love your characterization for Wil (the part about him being completely confused when Rath kissed him was priceless~) and I love emoting!Rath as well ♥ It's cute how Rath opens up around Wil ♥
schedule February 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Aaaakh.. This story of yours really haunts me to review it even in my sleep for days... I give up! I'll review it!

First, i like it a lot. Damn... Why did i find it only recently? Why not sooner? Aaaaaaarrrgh...
Second, i want more.
Third, more and more and more. Err, sequel? maybe the story of the next day?

Seriously, there have been lacking of RathxWil everywhere, even the not-so-slashy ones in ffnet. Anyway, i like this fic.

And sorry if i offense u in any possible way.
person miyo
schedule September 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh I like it! xD I do really wounder whats going on with Legault and Heath. It sounds cute!!
person i'm not giving my name to a comp!
schedule August 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
XD! X-cellent
person Foxfire
schedule July 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I've read this particular piece over several times, and it just gets better each time, both the morning wake-up call routine and the actual smutty bits.

Ah, one thing - okay, more than one, but one in particular - has always bothered me. Your average horse shouldn't be eating a good dozen apples as if it were a regular occurence. She'd probably end up dying of colic.

The other two problems I see are the gloves (are they on or off?) and the fact that Wil is apparently sitting down to eat with his quiver still on his back, although I can see him overlooking it, given the circumstances.
person Death over Time (logged off)
schedule July 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
RAINING OCTOPI!!!! (dances madly)

Ok, I am off my bloody rocker...

Yay! My fave F.E. pairing!!! Not 'nough of it around though... (looks back) actually, not enough Fire Emblem in general. (pouts)
person Evey
schedule June 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Heheh, That was certainly interesting. Oh, I cant wait till Fire Emblem 2 comes out. (Not that you care)

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person Blood Prince
schedule June 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is a very well written piece. I enjoyed it (even though I don't like Guy on Guy pairings) I hope you keep writing. My only requst is that if (and I hope you do) do another Fire Emblem piece (we need more of them) could you make it a straight pairing? Like Sain/Fiora?
schedule June 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow. Very well writen. They make such a cute couple. But I really want to encourage you to write the Legault/Heath peice soon. They're my favorite FE pairing. Thanks and keep up the good work!