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December 2, 2016 at 12:00 AM
This is a good story but there's one detail that's not right: Lloyd has yellow eyes, not red eyes (I checked his official artwork).
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December 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great story all except one part. Uhmmm, how should I put this. WINK WAS BLIND!!!!!!!!!!!!. Otherwise it was a great story.
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October 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
cheese
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October 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey, you know this is a great story, and I think you should some how continue it? I dont know how you would do since you said Lloyd was dead at the end, but it woulda been better if it was longer. *Shrugs.* Anyways, for your first attempt I think it was great, and the sex scene wasnt too bad either ^_^