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for Incoherent Symphony

by AmethystButterfly

person Darkraiser
schedule July 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ahhh!! YOu must Update! this Fic is so amasing! it jsut can't be one! what about sora? or Cloud? Or Riku!! You must update! XD I'm addicted!! You Rock my Socks!
person KinkyDoomHobbit
schedule June 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ohmygowdtoosexy o_o!!! brilliant story, so compelling! great smuttynes, and the relationship between Cloud and Leon was so interesting! And Riku with a belly ring... I could see it so clearly. It'd be a Crime is Nomura didn't add it to Riku's design. Nuff said. n.n loved it.

Any chance of a sequal?
person Kitsune Warrior
schedule May 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
SEQUEL!!!!!! ^_^
Your a great writer. I loved the way you wrote the characters.
very hot, but it seemed... rushed?... at the end.
It was still awesome though, Please write a sequel. ;_;
person Anon
schedule May 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
AYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYYYYYAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAYYYYYYY!!!! I love your story!!! It's good., Weeee
person Devious Lil Devil
schedule May 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*fans herself* whew! that was extremely hot!!! your writing skills are superb. i loved the personalities you gave the characters, especially leon's. :drool: i cant wait to read the sequel!! oh and yes, boys with belly button rings kick ass!! ^_^
person Mande
schedule May 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love this story, it was HOT!!!!
person Miaren Crowsdaughter
schedule May 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Definitely an unexpected pairing - but wow, it was HOT!

Erm - constructive stuff...Cloud seemed a little "house-wifey" but heck - you did more with your secondary characters than I tend to ;)