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December 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love the way you write. It's just so natural and every word leads the story forward. This is one of those fics that make you fall asleep smiling. Thank you.
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May 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I enjoyed the story very much!! You ve got talent there!
Just one thing and it is I think you need a beeta... your stoty had manby typos(misspelled words)
Other than that your story was good!!
Keep it up!!
Just one thing and it is I think you need a beeta... your stoty had manby typos(misspelled words)
Other than that your story was good!!
Keep it up!!
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May 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
LOL And I made some typos... I meant story* and many*
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May 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh sweet jeebus, why did you stop at chapter two!? Nooo, Keep going! I'm quite fond of the smooth predicament and how it can all fall together. It's been awhile since I've read some Tekken Hwoarang/Jin fanfiction. So for the sake of there isnt much good out there, please do attempt on posting a next chapter.
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May 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
No you must post up the good stuff now!!!!! *Inhales and then exhales* Okay I'm calm now. I can't wait to read more! Please update soon! I am licking it already!^^
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May 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Not bad, not bad at all... ^_^
About the only thing that bothered me was Jin calling Hwoarang a "sissy Korean." Jin doesn't seem the type to talk "smack talk" since he was likely raised to respect people (highly Jun's influence, with a little Heihachi thrown in for good measure)...
Nevertheless, it's a nice start, and I hope you continue writing... good luck! ^_^
About the only thing that bothered me was Jin calling Hwoarang a "sissy Korean." Jin doesn't seem the type to talk "smack talk" since he was likely raised to respect people (highly Jun's influence, with a little Heihachi thrown in for good measure)...
Nevertheless, it's a nice start, and I hope you continue writing... good luck! ^_^
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May 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OOOO Interesting! Hey i am liking this one! Please update soon. I want to read what will happen next! Nice story. ^______________^