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for The Great Below

by Lennith

person PurplePinstripeDevil
schedule August 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You have just made my year! Please update this story! There's very few CxA stories that are good and I can't wait to get to the smuttness! U-p-d-a-t-e, what's that spell? Update! ^_^
person Sarrasi
schedule August 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is really, really great! ^_^ I just got into Cliff/Albel and I'm so happy that there are authors like you that do them such justice. Albel is still Albel, arrogent and hot-tempered and Cliff is the same more-than-he-seemes guy that I loved so much in the game. I can't tell you how very pleased I was to find your fic.

The more of this I read, the more I fall in love with this pairing. Thank you so much for writing this and I sencirely hope to see more soon.

~Sarrasi
person shinigami_Sakura_the_third
schedule August 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
YOU yeah you! the Author! you write pretty well, the fanfic is really good detailed i love the idea you have for the fic, anf of course y love the pairing it´s kind of cool.. i like Ukie Albel XD, he is just destined to be uke XD!! just look at him o_o... handsome, arrogant, cold, beauty, sexy and more xD!!!... pls!! continue!! i wanna read more x3... i love it!! and can you please put more sex in the fic? and some sexy and wild things (im a perv i now)

see ya!!!
i hope you´ll continue!! x3
person Michiharu-Sama0123
schedule August 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hii...!! really cool XD i love this pairing.. AND I LOVE YOUR FIC!! i like that part of the flashback.. the one in italics xD..
please continue!!! i´ll wait for the next chappie :P .. and put more sex XD
person Shuimm
schedule August 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
The Great Below is my favorite fanfiction.. you got them right on character. Good luck writing the next chapter, I can't wait! :)
person Arien
schedule July 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love you! For ages I've been looking for a good CliffxAlbel fic, I so hope you write some more to this before I manage to kidnap Albel and force him to be my sex slave...mmm...

I love Albel uke and you actually make it all seem plausable. I look forward to the rough and tumble sex to come ^__^ Keep it up.
person Niffty24
schedule July 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow! That's really good! Poor Cliff, he fell for an Albel.

Hey that ryhmed.
person Raydar
schedule July 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I am not going to be satisfied until you finish this story... Yes. I want more. And this has got to be the best Yaoi of SO3 I have ever read. xD EVER! I love Cliff/Albel I NEED MORE CLIFF/ALBEL! NOW! Well plz update soon. Luvs!
person Niffty24
schedule July 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Aww, that's so sweat. I hope that they can have a happy ending. ^ ^
person Pervert
schedule June 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow! That was AWRSOME! I loved it! You have to update soon! ^^ The characters are written perfectly,your grammer is perfect, your ideas are fantastic! OMG that has to be the HOTTEST sex scene I've read it a LONG time. This has to be one of the best Star Ocean fanfics on AFF. I LOVE CliffxAlbel ^.^; I LOVE this fanfic PLEASE continue -o_-O You can't leave me hangin' it's too good I tells ya! Your an incredible writer!! >.< AGGGRRRRRRH! *explodes*