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June 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ehhhh...
--Nosebleed--
Hot, hot, hot. Bring in the Sephy. --loses fingers for using his nickname--
--Nosebleed--
Hot, hot, hot. Bring in the Sephy. --loses fingers for using his nickname--
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June 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I just read the first 4 chapters. Riku is sooo lucky. Not only does he have Sephiroth comming on to him. But, he hasn't ever gotten his ass kicked yet. I mean if Seph didn't like him, he would have been dead by now. update soon!
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June 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
more please.
Still mesmerized
Still mesmerized
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June 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OO, I like the first chapter. Very interesting n.n makes me want to continue reading... so I think i shall! Well written :)
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June 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow. You must continue! :D Sephiroth and Riku~ who'd o thunk it? Well, you, evidently... but whatever. :)
The feahter thing was wonderful, I had visions of Riku getting back to his room and letting it slip through his fingers over the balcony instead of storing it~ but thats just a random though. *cough* but yeah, the feather thin was funky, realy well describes, oddly intimate. Ang there was pleanty of imagry to be had, which was lovely. And... you gotta love how Sephy keeps pouncing on Riku without warning! I love how theres no middle ground, it goes from not kissing, to WHUPS! How did that tounge get there! XDD only Sephy could pull it off. Well done XD hehe
The feahter thing was wonderful, I had visions of Riku getting back to his room and letting it slip through his fingers over the balcony instead of storing it~ but thats just a random though. *cough* but yeah, the feather thin was funky, realy well describes, oddly intimate. Ang there was pleanty of imagry to be had, which was lovely. And... you gotta love how Sephy keeps pouncing on Riku without warning! I love how theres no middle ground, it goes from not kissing, to WHUPS! How did that tounge get there! XDD only Sephy could pull it off. Well done XD hehe
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June 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ah. Adoration goes to you, my friend. You rock. Very much so. Once again. Your Riku is a delicious mix of emotions, muahah...*ACK* Ahem. Furball. It took me 36 tries to beat a certain someone in the Platinum match. Considering the way I was making Sora run around the arena, while I was screaming, 'DON'T KILL ME!" I'd say that it was a fluke. Keep up the awesomeness!
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May 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I'd offer my betaship, but I'm just so afraid of messing things up, that I just keep quiet. You rock, really. You don't really need a beta, anyway. ^_^ And I adore this fic. I don't care where you take it, so long as Sephy darling *loses fingers* and Riku are together. There isn't enough of that pairing, damnit! Onwards! We demand another chapter! *collective heads nod*
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May 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh my... This is my absolute favorite of all Kingdom Hearts pairings and I'm sad to find it to be such a rare one.
I love this fic so far. It's well written but what I most like about it (besides the obvious, that is) is the wonderful characterization you have on Riku. It's good, obviously you've taken time to really think about that angsty soul and his reactions. I really don't know what to say about Sephiroth so far but I hope you treat him with the respect he deserves.
The event so far have been done artfully and I wish that you decide to continue this great story soon.
I love this fic so far. It's well written but what I most like about it (besides the obvious, that is) is the wonderful characterization you have on Riku. It's good, obviously you've taken time to really think about that angsty soul and his reactions. I really don't know what to say about Sephiroth so far but I hope you treat him with the respect he deserves.
The event so far have been done artfully and I wish that you decide to continue this great story soon.
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May 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
THIS IS A REALLY GOOD STORY. ITS VERY CREATIVE AND I HOPE YOU CONTINUE WITH IT AND UPDATE SOON!