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by Miaren

schedule February 9, 2019 at 12:00 AM

this was good,but I have one question,did Riku get his own wings?

Pokégirl555

person cas (stupid comp logged me off...)
schedule August 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Beautiful. And I'm glad you told me about it. I luved! Magnificent it was. Showz the relationship really well. Beautiful. *thumbz-up* Oh. And you get this. *handz you strawberry cheesecake* I promised yes? Hehe.
person Sam
schedule July 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Excellent! I hadn't found this story before today, so I read it all in one go. I approve of your hair fetish as well as frequent feather usage ("Soft feathers brushed his legs and ran gently up his back.".. *shiver!*). Psychotic!Cloud amused me. I hope you think about revisiting this someday.. it's screaming for an epilogue, and the world just needs more Seph x Riku.
person MY-Tenshi
schedule July 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OH you EVIL child! >:O
Cliffhanger, nuuuu! XD
But sorry I missed reviewing the last chapter, however but both were very nicely done, I wonder why Cloud attacked Sephiroth... jealousy is one possibility that has crossed my mind. :/
Hm, but very nicely, done, update soon!
person CrazYFangirl
schedule July 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
If i still didn't review your story i'm very surprised, it's like one of the best things i ever read!!!! and you update often so i don't have to desesperately wait of a new charpter too long X3 i cetainly encourage you to keep writing!! :D :D i love sephy :)
person Rissie
schedule July 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
...You mean... --lower lip trembles-- It's ENDING? It's going to be done soon?! --sobs-- Promise you'll write another sometime? Please?

...Evil Cloud. He has problems. --paranoid voice-- "I HEAR VOICES!!!"

Onwards!
person bluedragonstarheart
schedule July 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Awesome fic, perhaps a little attempt @ friendship with Cloud from Riku would spice up things to an ...interesting place, anyways great fic, PLEASE continue, easily the best KH fic I've seen since Nxye took college to heart and stopped Tortured by light, sequel to Bound by darkness. Later days, emial me @ bluedragon6@triad.rr.com if you like
person Earth Dargon
schedule July 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oooohhhh!!! I know I know! Its refering to Final Fantasy I, right? ^o^ Anyway I love the story so far (its really hard to find any good KH fics these days -_-). So any way keep up the good work!!! Now...where's my cookie?^_^
person Rissie
schedule July 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
WHOOOOOO. Hot!Shirtless Riku! --faints--

Ahem. After my nosebleed is quite over, that was great! :) The library book was from "Final Fantasy Classic" wasn't it? --shruggles-- Onwards! This fic sooo rocks...Anmd so do you!
person MY-Tenshi
schedule June 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ooooo... very nice.
Lately all I've seen is SoraxRiku, this is a lovely change of pace and your writing is incredible. :D
Nicely done, I can't wait to see more!