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May 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That turned me on and made my skin crawl all at once. I'm not sure if that's a compliment. Rest assured that one way or another, this piece was all too effective.
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May 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wow this story is awsome!! i feel sorry for little sora though, stuck in a bird cage and raped by Axel...big meanie. anyway i hope this story gets a new chapter soon, but after such a long first i think we can wait a bit
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May 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Evilly delicious, I must say.
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May 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Daaaaaaaaaaaamn. Moooooore. My brain still isn't working properly after that. Guh.
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May 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow, that was beautifully written. I love the slow pace of the story and the intense detail and thought that you've put into creating the characters and scenes. I was a little worried by your A/N near the beginning that this would be another silly perverted let-down of a story, but I'm glad I took the time to read it. You have an unusual and shocking amount of finesse when it comes to writing. I can't wait to read more of this beautiful piece.
-orydae
-orydae
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May 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wow. That's a brilliant piece of writing.
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May 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You have nooooooooooooooo idea how excited I was this morning to find this fic already posted. After the long wait, finally - finally - FINALLY I get to see it in all its glory! And let me tell you, IT DID NOT DISAPPOINT. There will never be another piece of writing out there that so fully captures Axel as the depraved, wicked, *rapist* that he is. Yaoi fics will try, but none will come close with such alarming accuracy. To whoever reads this fic: watch out, because the author has no fear to walk the path that our imagination does not dare to trod in. Be ready to discover the true definition of hardcore.