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i read this the first time when i was... 14 or 15?  i think one of the existing reviews here might actually have been mine.  at the time it was the darkest thing i'd ever encountered, and i totally loved it.  it had a pretty big effect on me, maybe shaped who i am today?  definitely gave me a taste for horrifying stockholm syndrome stories, anyway.  i remembered it out of the blue a few months back, and finally gathered the mental fortitude to bingeread it again.  tenish years later with a far better understanding of consent and a 2016-era concept of feminism/heterosexism/whathaveyou it was an experience, let me tell ya.  i remembered the ending considerably differently (one where sora eventually was rescued, but still not a happy one since he was totally Fucked Up by that point).

i wonder what kind of stuff you're writing these days.  if it's still this level of nasty i'm glad.  though uh, hopefully there aren't any 14-year-olds reading it.  i hope you're...okay?  not legitimately into kids?  hype for kingdom hearts 3?

i'm going to bed

uuuummmmmmmmmmmm, i was wondering efen i could barrow your peoplecage. i read your fic and got an idea for another fic, but i wanted to ask you first. i'm planning a post-KHII fic, with a compleatly diffrent chain of events, and (if you say ok to me barrowing the peoplecage) a modified people cage.
there will be some simalaritys at first, but it will quickly change. i promise! (and i apologise for my spelling, i am almost hopeless with out spell-check)

I take it back, the story doesn't need any more words(or lemons) @_@ it's the best the way it is; so dark, so descriptive, it's addicting.

"He was pinned down like a butterfly for study;" I love this line as well.

......I don't even know what to say. That was incredible. It was the darkest, most twisted and evil fanfic I've ever read. I serious shed a tear reading this but could not stop reading. So haunting and skillfully written...Just...incredible...*blink blink*

That was EXCELLENT!!! Great story!! :D It was beautiful!

OH MY GOD!!!! What the fuck, man?!?!?! Axel would never do such a thing. I actually felt nauseated after reading this and I have no gag reflex when watching excessivly violent films or trashy pornos, but this story...just wow....I give you congrats? *confuzzled*

This is the best, most dark, twisted story that I have ever read.
I read this before KH2 came out and didn't get a chance to comment before the site went down.
Words can not accurately describe how much I love this fic...everything is perfecty twisted.
I have to say I love the first chapter the most, and the second chapter could have used another lemon...keke
But seriously it is perfect the way it is.
Even though Axel is a complete and utter sadist I love the way you depict him...too many people now write him as a sniveling loser, and not as the complete badass he was in COM.
The imagery and lines from this story are haunting...[The sound of cured leather gliding across skin was unmistakable] and [I’m sitting inside of a—peoplecage.]
And [marzipan]...whenever I hear or see it I think of this fic...don't know why, but then I am compelled to read it again in its excellence.
You deserve something for writing this!

Seriously though, if you write anything...even if it's darker than this...I want to read it. You are obviously a great author and I would like to read anything else that you eventually write.

This fic was painful. It was absolutely horrible to read those things happening to poor Sora. It was frustrating and you just sorta wanted him to come to his senses and beat Axel to death.

It was a good fic though. I hope to see more stuff from you. Maybe more cheerful next time. XDDDD

THE DETAILS MAKE IT SEEM SO REAL AS IF IT WAS WRITTEN FROM EXPERIENCE, POOR SORA AXEL IS REALLY TEARING THAT ASS UP! AND I THOUGHT INVISIBLE TOUCH WAS BRAIN DAMAGE BUT THE STORY IS SO JUICY AND FILLED TORURE JUST THE WAY I LIKE IT KEEP WRITING.

awesome. that's like how i end my fantasies only sora is reincarnated and it starts all over again. this is the closest story to my fantasies that i've read. including the fact that they become accustomed to their "torture" and think of it as love. we might have some things in common.