rate_review Reviews

very good...I loved how you wrote both of the characters in this. Your Dante made me giggle. Would have liked to see more description as far as the hand job was concerned but over all very yummy!

AAAAAAWWWWWWWW!!! *DIES* That was hilarious, oh my god. XD And so hawt, oh my god. And sooooo cuuuuuuuute, oh, my, god. Yes. Muaha. Loved it. ;3

Magnifecent! The beginning was humorous. I hope there will be more chapters!

P.S. The cravat was a nice touch :]

yes, his..."beloved" brother XD XD

Mmmmm! Seeeexy! To bad you didn't do a lemon. I was kinda thinkin you would. Lol! But it'z all good. Nicely done. I totally luved the ending. *thumbz-up*

I loved this it was too sweet for words really but I have to tell you I loved it and hope that this wasn't a one shot and that perhaps you'll write a sequel? Please consider it, I promise that if you do I'll review you again! Also I really found I enjoyed this because the twins (I believe) in your fic were younger and not a whole lot of people write them at the age so it was nice to read and it would be nice to read a long or medium, or even a semi-short chapter story concerning the two when they were younger and didn't fight. Anyway I really liked this and hope to see more if you are willing to write it!

~Seeker

Wow. It wasn't actual sex and it was still hot. great job!!

As I said on your LJ... Awwwweh cute!!! ^________________^ Keep writing!


~Yin.