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November 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wow, for a story that promises so much there's so little. while it has enough to get someone to read through to the sex scene, it just ends there so abrubtly right now. hurry up and write more!
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May 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
It's the best PSO story I've seen so far. You don't make your OC become superheros. Keep up the good work.