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by Atroxian

person Seeker
schedule May 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey!
I really liked this, it was new and different and wonderfully written! Your very good at this! Also aren't you glade? You can put a chack mark next to this idea as complete since you'll be moving onto one of your other ideas now right?
Anyway wonderful job with this, very dark and bloody.

~Seeker
person Ningyou-san
schedule May 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
To me, you have always seemed like the embodiment of everything I tend to love with no guilt whatsoever. In writing this, you have crossed the line, many times, erased it, and splattered blood and cum all over it. Oh, how I love this.

XD
person Maki
schedule May 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I am purely breathless, speechless, and now brain-dead, drooling and twitching in a puddle of creamy goodness that which is fandom. I am going to lick your cyber boots for eternity for this artistic and twisted piece of work! Brilliant, dirty, and completely desirable, your way with detailing thoughts and gestures sends my very core into bursts of adoration and envy! You are officially my most favored of all fanfiction authors. Bravo!
person sapphirexkat2
schedule May 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Damn, talk about dark! Not bad. I'm used to the violence associated with these two ^_~

Later!

SK
person Aleiah
schedule May 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That has got to be the darkest DMC fic that I've read......ever (lol). You had lots of detail, lots, so much that I could picture the goings on in my mind. I must say that Verge is very sick in this one. His wanting to control what he considered, the embodiment of sin (I think I have that right). He should really think about himself, he seemed crazier than Dante's character. I enjoyed this one. Can't wait to see what you work on next!
person Jade Tokier
schedule May 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Well your welcome I'm glad I could inspire you. And thanks for the shout out. JT aka Panther