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Totally out of character and just terrible overall. 0/5

this is very good! I wouldn't mind reading the squall and tidus scene.... yes.. I think I'd rather enjoy that... well anyway, you have a very good writing style and I hope to continue to read more on this story in the future. I am quite looking forward to it, so don't be shy to email me to proof read it for you.

SO that was the end of cloud, hmnnnn,,,,
What about Riku???
and Riku's relationship with sora
Is he going to get the death penelty?
say nooooooooooo
please update as soon as poossibel

I love your story!
And believe me thats the price all rapists shoudl pay in my opinion! CLOUD GOT WHAT HE DESEREVD FREE RIKU-KUN!
I hope you update soon, I have 4 weeks till schoo, starts again adn 10th grade year will most likely be worse that 9th so im not gonna have any time to read so pls update soon!
Later days

Menou

YAY me like me like! update soon please

No I don't know who it is!! Probably something american....
And i'd like to read the TidusXLeon lemon..... but not the rape!! Poor Sora!!!! *sobs*

Write more.....Write more Write more Write more Write more Write more....this is getting really good......I wanna know what happens next...plz right more this is great.
-Setsuna

*cries* poor Sora....and poor Riku please make more chapters I really want to know what happens after this please...it was touching...how dare cloud touch sora.....*rawr*

YAY!!! YOU KILLED THAT SON OF A BITCH FOR WHAT HE DID TO SORA! But...... you also got taken to prison..... WAAAHH!!!!

Minime: There, there it's okay when you out for revenge you really don't care about what happens after you got it. So! Riku we conguagulate you!

Anaru: Yeah! Your in jail but that doesn't matter!

Minime: As they say revenge is sweet!

Squall: You do know that he could get life for killing another?

Anaru: Shut up Mr. I got a french fry up my nose!

Tidus: Hahaha! That was pretty funny! But back to the matter at hand! You shouldn't be celebrating someone going to jail!! Sora is so heart broken he won't even be in this review!

Minime: Oh yeah? -types what the hell do you mean I won't be in this review?!-

Sora: What the hell do you mean I won't be in this review?! Uh? Sorry! i didn't mean to say that! -runs out of the room-

Squall: What the fuck is wrong with you guys?!

Tidus: Uh? -finds several empty candy boxes- These bitch's are totally sugar high!

Anaru&Minime: I"M NOT! Uh? YAY!! I SKUNK!!! COME HERE BOY!!!

Tidus&Squall: OH SHIT!!! -runs out of the room-

WAHHH no why did he have to rape sora... :((( well cloud deserved to DIE :D