AFF Fiction Portal

rate_review Reviews

for Twisted Vacation, Part 2

by AlarynDrei

person Inamoto
schedule May 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hey, just wanted to say that this fic is really good, and really nice to read. I really like the pairing Leifang x Hitomi. And the Leifang/Hitomi/Kasumi sex...just awesome.
Although it is really good I actually was a little disappointed with the first part, when you paired up Tina and Ayane...I would rather have seen Ayane x Kasumi...which I still hope you will do...hey, I'm a guy!!
Anyway, great fic, and I hope you haven't given up on it since it's good one. I would defininitely read more of it if you continued it ;). btw...5/5
person Anon
schedule October 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I take big offense on the kasumi rape man. That was fucking bullshit she would have
noticed if anyone was coming, she has superior senses and if they tried to tackle her,
they would get their fucking asses kicked. A dissapiontment there, a really big dissapiontment
person Anon
schedule June 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
totally awsome. you definately need to make moe
schedule June 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I liked it. I also liked the first Twisted Vacation. I miss Christie though but I'll get over it. Good story so far. I'll be waiting for the next chapter! 5 Stars easily. ^_~

Sly