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Genius. Please add more. Maybe a ganghbang with Diao &Shang Xiang???

People who like this type of shit is sick in the head. You may have a lot of reviews and is a good writer, but I've seen writers here with WAY more so your not that good. I don't really expect 50 reviewers or more to dig this stuff.

Great fic that you got here, I'm a sucker for fic's like these which concentrate mainly on the story - and as well angst and the brooding genre's are another thing I'm a sucker for. It's a great story thus far, and you know if you thought more into this it could become a very interesting AU fanfic. ^^

Keep it up!

Dude you are sending me in a sexual frenzy! That was super hot you should make another chapter or something that barbarian thing sounds like a lot of fun to read. You are an excellent writer a few spelling mistakes but who cares? That was hormones gone crazy great!

Excellent, as always, perhaps rivalling your DW4 fic Desperate Scheme. Very well detailed in most parts, the story flows well from scene to scene and of course its great to see an author regularly covering a wide range of videogames. As an author myself, the little diary thing at the end was good to read as well.
Keep on writing quality, lengthy and of course detailed fics.

Nice to see a new VG fic from you, and a terribly sordid tale at that. You've indeed managed to give weight to the first Dong Zhuo scene in parallel to the mass event later. Diao Chan's terror and pain from being mass-raped as a virgin don't come off quite as strong as one would suppose, though. This might actually make it slightly easier reading, but the violent content is still obviously there. The twins add a nice bit to the story, which is already filled with detail to such degree that not having played the game is no hindrance to appreciating the lemon. Top notch stuff, great handling of the subject matter and a surprisingly humorous ending.

I guess it's from a different part, but she's still quite a fair lady: http://www.studiodink.com/Cheesecake_FB.htm

I've read ur fics and thought they were great but some of them were taking things too far but overall.....not bad! Anyway, i saw a person named vgss writing a dynasty warrior faq....is that you? Just curious....

Poor Diao Chan and SSX... Well you are one excellent writer, you seem to take pride in your work. You did so well with this but I HIGHLY doubt you could ever write a Albel+Nel fic (from StarOcean 3) that is in character, graphic long somewhat hardcore sex scene, and a well detailed story/one-shot on that couple that is just as good as this. Why? All Albel+Nel lemons I've read suck (except for 1 I've read) and that's a hard couple to write about since most good authors like you can't ever get it right.

Um, yeah whatever... Your a great writer!

Thank you both for your support :)

Critic 07 - My, that's truly the best compliment I can receive. The reason it takes me so long to churn out stories is because I'm so fanatical about proper grammar, veriage, and construction that even though I've been working on nothing other than fanfiction for 4 days, I can only manage about 10kb of finished product each day. Comments like yours make it all worth while :)

Ninja Gaijin - Yeah, since all my stories are in alternate realities, I do have to make a great deal of effort to keep the plot beleivable. Throwing Sun Shang Xiang in at the end was one of the few times I looked the other way, simply because she's such a fun persona :)

Don't be distracted with the reviewer before, s/he probably can't take hardcore and prefers fluffy stuff instead. The world of the Three Kingdoms aren't the place for mushy love stories, by the way--people get killed & stuff.

Good choice of background story. Apart from Sun Shang Xiang, the other events were quite plausible in an altenative scenario where Dong Zhuo doesn't get killed by Lu Bu. Being the tyrant that he is, this is probably what Dong Zhuo would do to Diao Chan if he ever discovered that she's got a part in Wang Yun's plot.

There is too much DW fanfics that feels 'wrong' out there--most commonly caused by storylines that deviate way too far from the ROTK novel (forgive me, I'm a purist). Yours is not one of them.