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person Eijeigami
schedule June 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh noez! You can't just cut it off there ;-; I'm all sad now. Pooorr Sora.

On a side note, I think you're writing this fantastically. I've noticed a few boo-boo's though.

Err...yeah, nevermind. I'm sure you'll find them yourself.

person Dreamer
schedule June 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Somehow I'm not surpised at Sora's faters reaction. I'm interested to see how this turns out.
person Myownhappyending
schedule June 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Another twist to the story -.-' lol Just couldn't help it could ya? ^_^ I can't believe that Sora's dad would do that, but then again that sometimes happens in real life...so....yeah
person yuki
schedule June 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
The words Sora spoke to Riku on the ferry were so sweet... It brought tears to my eyes.
I simply loooved this chapter and you've re-inforced my love for this story too!
How is this all going to end? Will riku be able to see Sora again? Ohh! the suspence...
Update soon!
person Dreamer
schedule May 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
So enters a plot twist. What will happen when Sora's parents come home earlier and discover that Sora's not there. It will be interesting to see their reactions to Sora's new relationship.
person Yuki
schedule May 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Sweet princess, I have the feeling that things are going to get difficult for our two lovers...
But still, I loved this chapter and please don't let anything too bad happen to them?
You're my all time fav author, did I already tell you that?
Update soon!
schedule May 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You.... have.... to update!!!!!!!! Oh, man. Are Sora's parents going to catch him and Riku at it? I simply can't wait! Update soon!
person simonski32
schedule May 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ahhhhh you updated!!! :)
person Tamika
schedule May 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I have a bad feeling about this... the parents are coming home and so much has happened between the two boys, will their love survive?
Please update quick, you're leaving me hanging! That lemon was hot, I especially liked that last part where you only wrote down the words... you could perfectly picture them without having every move explained...

Tamika!
schedule May 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ahhhh...another fine chapter. Oh nooo...Sora's parents are coming home! The boys had better be together in the end...or i'll cry. Oh by the by...your lemons just get better and better don't they?