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June 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
update update update update woot i love your story XD cant wait for the nex update / very talented and very well done CONTINUE O.o or well or JUST CONTINUE O.O WHAT WILL HAPPEN I WANT TO KNOW I WANT TO KNOW NOOOOOOOO I NEED TO KNOW PLZZZZZZZ GAH XD / woops srry got carried away^^
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June 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh my god!! Chapter 16 was soooo good. I enjoyed seeing Riku get topped for the first time, and it was very believable to see his reaction to it. Oh no though! Sora's dad doesn't like the boys being together! Well...i say screw Sora's dad! Our boys need to be together! Another great chapter! You are my favorite!
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June 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
how evil
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June 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I'm glad to be reading this story again, as I never got to finish it, but I just have one observation for the first chapter. If you have changed the ages slightly, then perhaps you should re-read the first chapter, because you still have it that Sora is going on 16 rather then his new age of 17. Other wise, I will most likely save reviewing until I finish reading the storym unless I make another observation. Ja ne.
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June 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Sora, Riku, nooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo i hope you get the next chapter up soon, love xxxxxxx
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June 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh god... nooo... Why?! WHY???!
That's the worst thing that could've got happened... *sniffles*
they were so happy together, why did that bastard of a father ruin everything?!
Tell me that everything is going to be okay? it is going to be okay right? He is going to pay, right??
Man, this got me so emotional... update quick please, I need to know what happens next!
-Tamika
That's the worst thing that could've got happened... *sniffles*
they were so happy together, why did that bastard of a father ruin everything?!
Tell me that everything is going to be okay? it is going to be okay right? He is going to pay, right??
Man, this got me so emotional... update quick please, I need to know what happens next!
-Tamika
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June 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
My God woman! Update! I read your story up to the bday party part 2 yesterday and finished the rest today!!! You better update soon or else!!!!!
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June 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
WTF? What the hell just happened? Wasn't Sora jst saying how nothing is goin to serperate them...and then a homophobic father....SERPERATES them?! Well that's drama for you *sigh*. OH WELL! Life aint perfect!! You hear that Sora RIKU?! MWAHAHA! Sheesh and what's up with the dad man? It's like he has a pole stuck in his ass or something. Someone should kill him...nah.. or you can make it a happy ending and make hi understand that love comes in all different gender,size, and shape! ^^...that'll boring though.....GOD! Please update the next chappy! THis was great! USually I don't like SoraxRiku but you made it worth while! IMpressed! Keep going! and don't dicontinue this fanfic! You're gonna let alot of people down!
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June 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
helllloooooo, this is a veeeeeery good fic i loved it and i hope that you will update very soon. i hope that sora and riku will be together because they fit perfect together, i hope that sora´s dad will let them be together. see you in the next chap byeeeee
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June 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i got two things to say to you:
1) Continue with the story, it is bloody great
and
2) Make that bastard have hell to pay for taking Sora-san's happiness! Pls. dun let a domestic dispute tear these two great bishies apart!
signed the vulpixfairy
1) Continue with the story, it is bloody great
and
2) Make that bastard have hell to pay for taking Sora-san's happiness! Pls. dun let a domestic dispute tear these two great bishies apart!
signed the vulpixfairy