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person Setsuna
schedule June 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
WOW!!!!!!!!!!! I cried T_T I hope Sora is ok and Riku stays with him......I don't like Sora's parents...please write more I love it.
person Shyne
schedule June 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was the most amazing thing I've ever read! I've just started reading fanfiction, and I must say that I'm blown away by your writing style, creativity and imagination! I love this story!
Thank you for making my first approach to fanfiction such a pleasant one! You're my rolemodel from now on!
Please update soon, I'm dying to know what will happen!

XXX,

Little Shyne McShine
person Tamika
schedule June 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I... I'm speechless... That was...omg...!
So emotional... you're so good!
Sora... why did this have to happen... poor,poor little Sora-chan...
Please make his parents pay! Especially his dad! He needs to be killed off or something!
I'm all emotional by this... Please update soon to make me feel better!
I'm officially a fan of yours!

Tamika
person Tsuki Seishin
schedule June 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*teary eyed* OMG! you have to update soon please!! I want to read more! It's so awesome and angsty and wonderful and...and so much more *giggles* please keep updating! I'll keep a look out for it ^-~ ~Tsuki
person simonski32
schedule June 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh!!!!!! sora must live! and they need to stay together :( :( :(
person Yuki
schedule June 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I am so sad right now... Oh my god! I've never cried for a fanfic before! You're so wonderful in describing emotions!
What a tragedy for Riku and Sora... *Wipes away a tear* Cloud really spoke well and put the Nagakawa's in their place!
I love this story so much, give me a happy ending soon, I can't take the drama anymore!

Yuki
person Shadow2007
schedule June 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
T.T so sad, what will sora's parents do. O NO GAH nEED TO KNOW UPDATE FAST
great chapter but so very sad i hope everything will be ok UPDATE SOON XD
T.T
person hikari216
schedule June 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You go cloud! That was AMAZING!!! I felt my eyes watr in the begining there, it was cute but heart breaking at the same time. You know how to put sooo much emotion into your stories that its unbelievable. Great job and I hope you will update for the next chapter as fast as you did for the previous one! You are my hero!
PS: I loved the rikuxsora one-shot!!!
person Conjure_Lass
schedule June 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh...god. I seriously cried. I had to get a damn tissue. Please don't split our boys up! Pleeeaassee!! I mean..i'll die! Oh, and that was a really good chapter, even though I hated it on some level. And Cloud rocks..
person July
schedule June 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
NOOOOOO! T___T *wails*