rate_review Reviews

So far this is the only story I have seen wuth the most chapter i have. VERY IMPRESSIVE. VERY WELL DONE.

Hell this like a book! ^_^

Is is father homophobic or what? I think that this is such a hot story. And, I am bi, so I totally understand what sora and riku are going through.

WOW. this story is awsome. But the thing is that all they ever did was sex! (I loved that part ^_^) But since all they ever really did was sex, You should have added at some point in the story that Sora was questioning why thats all they ever did. And at the end of the story, when Sora wakes up, he should have ammesia and not remeber Riku at all (that would be a reall tearjerker..)

This story was so kool. I always was asking "whats gonna happen next?????' lol damn SO AWSOME

You...you...ended it...there?! WHY?! Why? WHY?! Are you TRYING to drive me freakings nuts? WTF DUDE? Need update...*twitch* Need...updat...now! NOW!!! *twitch twitch*

Must have update. So saddening! So hurtful! So..I don't know! Die Sora's parentes!!! (namely the father) DIE!!! DEATH TO THEM ALL!!!!!! BUWAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!! They must DIE!!!!!!

me: *chops Sora's parents into little itty bitty pieces* DIE!!! MUWAHAHA!

Sora: 0.o what the?

Riku: *covers Sora's eyes* Don't look. Dude, such violence...

me: *twitch twitch* They shall DIE!!!!! MUWAHAHAHA!!! *continues to hack away at the parents*

Anti-gay is not cool! Down with the anti-gay ppl!

YeS tHeY ALL ShAlL DEI!!!!!! DoWn WiTh ThEm!!!! *shifty eyes*

Riku and Sora:...wtf? psychopath...

me: *lunges at something no one else can see* DIE! *CRASH!!* x_x owwy...

Riku: ...

Sora: ...

(yes I'm insane)

Holy cow. If you've read any of my other reviews you'd understand that im a hard person to give a 10 out of 10, but this story is perfect. The characters always stay true to their personas, the sex scenes are well done, every little detail is remembered. You are the idol writer, and you need to keep writing. Oh, and if you get the time, could you try to review 'Waiting no more' on fanfiction.net? I need my idols opinion. lol geekyness.

Omg *spasm* You better not kill off Sora and make a happy ending!!!!!! And the chapter was too short! Must read, more!!!

I'm interested to see how this crisis will resolve it self.

wow, you wrot on of the best fanfics i've ever read and i hope you keep going w/ this wonderful story. thanx for a great fanfic to read and enjoy.

NOOOOOOOOOO! Sora... Riku... Wah~ Great chapter very sad. I have finally been able to read and review after 58 other e-mails that needed to be deleted.... Thanks for e-mailing me! I can't wait for the next chapter! Please update as soon as you can!

ooooh please don't break them up!! i love this story so damn much, that would ruin it! please update soon!