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person Lucien
schedule July 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow, I just read the first two chapters and I'm hooked. I love it! You bring Sora and Riku onto a whole new level!
person Setsuna
schedule July 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
NOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!! It can't be the end T_T Oh it was so good...you gotta write another story...your did an awsome job keep it up
person Tamika
schedule July 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This was soo good! Oh my god... so touching! This story is absolute #1 favourite!
Your message was loud and clear, gurl! I hear ya, I really do! Riku&Sora 4-ever!!
I was also wondering: is it just me or are you planning on writing more? It's not completely finished, is it? Just say so, I know you want to...

-Tamika
person monkeyz_rulez
schedule July 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
aaaaaaaaaawwwwwwwwww please don't end it!!! me love this story for all it's worth!!! *whimpers* horray for a great ending. until next time.
person King_of_Waves
schedule July 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I read this story ever since you first posted it on fanfiction. its so touching...you message was eccellent. I was really pissed when sora's dad did not accept him for who he was. its so unfair to do that. But I am so glad that Sora an dRiku stayed together. It was very touching indeed. Congrates on this eccellent story.
If you want, please read mine. Its called Dark angel sora, and I just posted it yesterday.
person simonski32
schedule July 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
yea!!!!!! you finished xD. awesome...
schedule July 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
omg this is like my favourite story ever! It has like a million lemons.. yet still has a plot that isn't just about sex... that's hard to do...
person Phill Kaiba
schedule July 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I been reading this fic for a long tim and as you seen I have reviewed it before and as i said before it is a masterpiece of wirting, please, please write more, but the last chapter, OMG that chapter heartbreaking. brilliant work again!
person kirameki
schedule July 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This was very good. The sex scenes were definitely hot. The only real things I think you need to watch are some minor grammatical and spelling things. Like using implied insted of complied. And please, never use the word got again. All the unnecessary gots really started to get on my nerves after awhile. Other than those few things it was very well written and I can't wait to read more.
person Angie
schedule July 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
So far this is the only story I have seen wuth the most chapter i have. VERY IMPRESSIVE. VERY WELL DONE.

Hell this like a book! ^_^