rate_review Reviews

I think your story is great so far and it would be awsome if you would continue writing it.

It's good so far. Hope you update soon.

It's really goin' well...please keep writing!!!

Hey Tera, nice job so far! XD Im really looking forward to the rest of this fic. Please write more soon. Though, I _do_ have a little nitpicking to do, if you dont mind. Tis just contructive critisism, from one auther to annother. Ok, first off, Eikes eyes are green, not blue. Its a small detail, I know, and difficult to remember if youve not really ever played the game, so I can forgive it . Also Id like just a little more discription. I always like to discribe the surrounding area and like to discribe things and goings on to the upmost, but still not over power the reader, to give them some room to use the imagination, but still explain whats going on. Well, thats really all I can think of. And I still must admit, this is a great idea. Nice going TJ! By the way, need some help with the yet parts? Love ya!

~Angelas