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I had to write again, I loved that part at the end with Magoichi and Kotaro. Good job!

Wow, I have to say you did the action really well, better then some. Great chapter, can't wait to see what happens next!

Whoa, great chapter! Loved the dialogues - Kotaro's taunts were very witty and evoked just the right reactions from the demon. Excellent fight scenes, too. You described it all so very well and I remembered how hard a time I had trying to beat this guy in the actual game :) (those legs were a bitch!)
Also loved the hurt/comfort scene at the end. You gave Kotaro a very good and believable background and I could sooo empathize with the poor guy when he read that note. I hope Kotaro will take Magoichi up on his offer...
So I take it the next chapter will be the final battle with Nobunaga? I'm very impressed at how you've managed to stay so close to the actual game story line!
Keep writing, by all means! I can't wait to see the next chapter - and of course the eventual 'after-battle-quality-time' between Magoichi and Kotaro, if you know what I mean...
Greetings from Dany

Awww so sweet of Magoichi! And you didn't kill Kotaro *glee!* I liked the fight against Ginghamphatts, very well done. Update again soon!

This chapter was great, I liked it almost as much as the last. You have to keep going, I wanna know what's gonna happen next.

I know I'm late, but I finally got through all of chapter 11, and the ending was amazing, one of, if not, the best chapters in the story. Great job once again

A very cute conversation between Kotaro and Oyu. So she's on to them, huh? :) I liked Kotaro's response; wondering whether he had been too obvious...
You have me looking forward to the final battle now - I know from (painful) experience how hard action scenes are to write, but I think you will pull it off quite nicely!
Your last sentence made me chuckle; I have a feeling you already have a few things lined up to go wrong...:)
Excellent work. Keep those chapters coming!
Dany

very good continuation and a nice insight into Kotaro's background. Keep up the good work!
Dany

Excellent work so far! I've found myself marveling at your writing skills throughout all 10 chapters. You are very articulate and eloquent and your attention to detail makes this story a treat to read. It's rare to see an exceptionally well-written story on this website (not to put aff down or anything...) and especially among writers of game fiction, but you did a great job so far. I really want to know what happens next. It's been a while since I played the game, but I still remember enough to compliment you on sticking so tightly to the original plot and incorporating all the game's characters and other characteristics, eg. the potions and such.
I'd hate to sound cliche, but...please update soon!
Greetings from Dany

Another great chapter, They finally admited they liked each other! I can't wait to see what happens next!