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by Niffty24

person sexysesshiesama
schedule January 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
this was really good. I LOVE KRATOS AND YUAN! ...uhm, anyways...it was written well and very sweet. much better than the empty, nonsensical one of FFnet. it took me forever to find this, but finally saw the category for RPGs and such...so smart...well, anyways, i tried to review logged in but life hates me so just so ya know this is my adultfiction penname as well as one of my FFnet ones, in case you care. ttfn
person dirtyhentaigoddess (too lazy to log in)
schedule December 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
nice fic! I think I've read this one before though, is this a repost?

Anyhoo, I wanted to tell you that this is really good, especially for a first time lemon fic. =)

Keep practicing your writing and it will get even better! oh, and yay for Kratos and Yuan! ^_^_^
person denise
schedule June 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
WEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!
This is so adorable!! It's on my favorites now! Great job on this! Make one of Kratos and Lloyd! Hehehe
-denise
person Tally
schedule June 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I luffed it! You should definitely continue writing more angsty Kratos/Yuan fics... Many many more...
person Xeora
schedule May 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
AAAAAAAWWWWWWWW!!!!!!!! :D This was sssssssooooooo sweet!!!! Sweet and not smutty! XD YAY! *glomps*
person Paine77
schedule April 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is awesome I loved Kratos and Yuan here. You protrayed them so well. *drools* I love how you wrote the lemon stuff..Yuan and Kratos are so feisty! It started off so dramatic and dark, which you did very well. I there gonna be more?? You must write more ^_^