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July 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG love the story
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July 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Well, this was an entertaining little piece of smut. I don't know KH (never played it) but I don't think it's necessary to enjoy this fic. Wonderful use of words and pacing. Makes me appreciate all those yaoi pics I've seen of this pairing even more. Keep up the good work.
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July 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
now i wanna see some of the positions sor is going to be doing. but this story is so damn hot and im reading at night its a good thing i have the airconditioner on. and trust me you would be hot if you do what i do when reading a story like this. {and its not masturbating. get your mind out of the other gutters.}
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July 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
forgot somthing. i loved the part when you said riku was deep throating his pen i actually fell out my chair laughing. then i got up and ran around the house jumping around saying OMG! AND then im not finish i went out side and started telling every body these words "HE! got caught deep throating HIS pen. for some reason they just didnt get it.
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July 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Im sorry this is my last one seriously. the part when riku was coming on to sora was to die for. It kinda sounded like sora was about to die when riku had his ass in his face the way sora just frozed. and i loved the ending i have a question though. "WHAT KIND OF FREAKY MOVE ARE THWY GONNA BE DOING? because if they freaky i have to read that book. im going to the library on friday.
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May 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Now this deserves a review. Ah, what a nce and fluffy one-shot! I really enjoyed this story! I was so fangirly when Riku asked Sora not to pull away...and the lemon made me happy, it was sweet and sexy and so so good! Lovely job! Looking forward to any future works!
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May 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
"That was one of the best one-shots I have ever read! Probably the best, since you protrayed them nicely and it wasn't too rushed. And when writers put that whole "His ass looks so good... but... I can't be gay, right?" thing in it gets fucked up so I like how you didn't and Kairi's part had me laughing especially when she asked if Riku thought Sora liked her. That was priceless. All in all, perfect fiction here. ^_^ Absolutely adored it" <--- i TOTALLY agree w/ this. This was an awesome one-shot! Too bad it's only a one-shot...You must write more!
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May 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh my God! Such fluffy hawtness. ;D Their intimate scene was really good. I wish it was more than a one-shot so that you could continue writing the lemony-goodness. :) Good job! <3
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April 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I LOVED IT! It was just sooo hot and sweet at the same time. I loved the ending ' I really really love you...well maybe...' lol cracked me up! when Riku was deep throating his pen, I thought I was going to fall out of my chair in laughter. And were he says....Rikkuuu.....whaaat....lol. it was just so funny and yet a great story at the same time. Keep up the good work, and I hope to read more of your work.
-Black
-Black
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April 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
What can i say? this has got to be the best Kingdom Hearts-Rikku X Sora-one-shot-smut-fic ever! Seriously, you have my applause! The imagery was beautiful, the action was flushing, and your tone was casual and fun. it was a cute and quirky, but sensual twist. i laughed, i blushed, i even.... ummm nevermind ^^; In short, i loved it, and will never look at a library the same again!
Keep up the awesome work! you rock'n, sexy woman you! ^___^
Keep up the awesome work! you rock'n, sexy woman you! ^___^