rate_review Reviews

I have to say that this is one of the better fic's I'v seen in a long time.
You have done a great job on writing out this story and I hope to hear more soon. :)

This is great so far! Very well written! I can't wait till the next part is up!

I was right I have seen this before. Is good in both venues :p Vaati = evil such a nice thing.

You know, I don't even read the fics here anymore. I'm extremely picky and I'd rather not shift through garbage to find something that meets my taste. However, I decided to take a chance and satiate my craving for a nice, dark Legend of Zelda fic staring a villain and Princess Zelda. I've been craving one of those for a while. I get fanfiction cravings; they're almost like actual physical cravings. It's rare I find a fic that suits a craving of mine. However, this one does. I'm glad I decided to click on your link. I haven't been disappointed. I like Vaati's consistancy. Hell, I like Vaati. I think you portray him well. So there you go. You have me on my toes, which is hard, extremely hard to do. I'll paitiently wait for the next chapter. Take your time. It makes for the best writing. Kudos to you, and good luck with this fic.

This seems to be a pretty well written peice. I can see your clear love for Vaati in this chapter, since you seem to take such care in describing his character and mapping out his personality. I like Vaati. I've only seen him in the Minish Cap, but I take to most villains almost instantly, and he's no exception. I never thought of him having a thing for Zelda because I never played either Four Swords game. But who cares? Good job so far. Too early in the story to say what's what, but you've captured my attention, and I'll be keeping an eye on this piece.

I have no idea why you have no reviews on this so far! It's brilliant, and possibly the first Adult fanfic I have seen involving Vaati (mine's still in the works, and it's not sexy at all for good reasons). And it's something I certainly wouldn't have thought of... perhaps it will inspire more authors to the love of Vaati.