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April 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
damn!!! that is one of your bests chapters of any of the chapters of any of your stories!! it was getting me all horny..lol i loved it
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April 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG. This was SO hot...I almost forgot about how well it was written. ;)
(And it WAS well written).
(And it WAS well written).
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April 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
WOW! I dont know what to say, that was just absolutely breathtaking! So amazing! One of the hottest, most erotic chapters I've ever read. And the description of the sex was so fucking hot!!! Man, I'd love to be fucked like that - so hard and so fast with 'pure unadulterated lust'. This chapter is so raunchy and sexy. Just reading it is making me so hot, thinking of a big, hard, throbbing cock thrusting up and down...oooooh!
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April 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Whoohoo! Used my real name to review for once. Since I don't have an account here I guess it doesn't really matter if I do or if I don't. Anyway, the descriptions are really vivid here; it's good. I always felt that on ff.net, you had to be so restrained in your writing, in order not to break any rules. But over here? I think it's better because you can really let yourself be free in your creativeness and in the use of descriptions. I think that this really really is shown in the way you wrote this chapr. Hope to see more soon.
Until then.
Until then.
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April 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Very interesting story...if one were female. Just a bit too much male descriptives for me to deal with. :P If perhaps a few female ones were thrown in to balance it...then it would be fun for the whole family.
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April 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Nice story!!
Do you mind to post that story back in here? I'm so looking forward to the 2nd chap.
Do you mind to post that story back in here? I'm so looking forward to the 2nd chap.
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April 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Awesomeness! I wish I could write like that. Well I could, but I'd fall over from giggling too hard. XD
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April 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This was at once erotic and moving. You could feel his pain and dream his dreams.
Excellent.
Excellent.
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April 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow! That was a very nice chapter. I really liked the way it was written, different from your usual stuff, but nice and poetic. I loved it, the description was great, especially of his cock!
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April 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Whooooa..... You rock! So sexay!