rate_review Reviews

What a great chapter! I love the part where Lady was undressing really slowly, taking her time, removing her soaking wet clothes, with the cold bottle placed across her chest - that was really turning me on lol. And with phrases like, "Ahhhh, that felt good" and "That would really hit the spot", it was great - what a wonderful image! So hot!! It was a very funny chapter as well. Vergil was extremly horny and sexy - "Since you’re already naked, why don’t I join you?" lol, I love that line. The ending was great, what a place to stop, just as they're getting to the really smutty part. It just leaves me begging for more!

ah!! just like the other one!!! horny!!!!lol.....only you could do this =^^= very good!!!!more....more.....more...
lol well bye bye!!

YES! YES! YES!!! They say 'Things comes to those who wait' & man, i've been one patient mutherfucker for my 'lameman's terms' chapter & i got it!!! Hahaha! I like the vivid descriptions of horizontal jogging, '"What he wanted right now was to feel a tight, hot pussy wrapped around his throbbing cock." He JUST wanted it THEN? lol...looks like i must be the only Randy Da Rooster then, huh? I like da bit where it says in the chapter, "Sometimes, she pants so hard against his ear and cries out in such abandon that he nearly spills his seed deep within her. He was normally careful not to get her pregnant. She refused to take any part in female contraception and Vergil pulled out in time, all the time." lol. Good, never get a bitch pregnant. She'll be on your ass with child support & shit (unless you're married). However why didn't he just wear a condom, which is da most fuckin sensible thing to do?! Don't tell me 'A demon who saves the day killing baddies' can't afford 3 fuckin £'s for a packet of durex's from da vending machines...better yet, he could get 'em from da NHS! They practically give 'em out free! (Although they would only be regular condoms..not da flavoured ones or ribbed ones) Anyways, cool chappie V! Make more like this!!

Quite graphic. And an interesting read. Of course it would be interesting to see what she could do with other characters. Either self made ones or ones from another game/movie.

pls pls....pls pls continue........
CLIFF HANGER~~~~~

“What? You want me to suck your cock, you sick son of a bitch?” lol hahaha why not?! lol 'He reached down to her hairless pussy, finding her wet as he inserted a finger inside.' yeh i like doin dat too lol (not to myself, to my girl, so dnt have any smart-ass ideas). cool chappie, V! :-D

WHOA! Dang girl! You really made Lady a bad bad girl! And Vergil a horny prick, but all the more loveable. AWESOME!

Hawt. Just hawt. Looking forward to the next one, so mean of you to leave us hanging like that. XD

That's wonderful!! Any more chapters to come?? Nice work, pls update.

oh!!!! sweet i love it i'm gonna go now and read the other chap. bye bye!!=^^=