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[Right, now, the strongest theme I picked up in all three chapters read was a powerful blend of poetic phrasing and passionate description. I could feel a real emotional strength in those intimate parts, and others too. You have a knack for conveying the feeling of your fiction, that's for sure . The way in which the pleasure and lust is described with such desire and wanton bliss, how for example in the 2nd one Vergil's thoughts play over the coming act again and again, colouring it with poetic wording the same way the mind swims in the possibilities when faced itself with the same anticipation, and the way he savours and gorges on the sensation, even of merely pondering the deed. Its like a verbal reflection, no, embodiment, of the relentless hunger felt by the characters themselves. Its powerful, like the very thoughts running through your head captured so precisely, I can see you probably enjoyed writing these . there was some humour towards the start, good humour, it made me chuckle . All in all, poetic and powerful, that's as good a label as I can think of to sum it up.]

Not bad, Veronica! Though if he were really horny he should have blown his load inside her. *LOL* Hot stuff! *needs a cold shower*

Simply SIZZLING. *wipes sweat from brow*

If there's one thing I admire about your writing style, it's the fact that you allow a psychoanalysis at the same time as some action. Not only that but you keep Vergil in character all the time. It's amazing! Tell me when you update! XD

5555!!! I'm luaghing at Lady that she answer Vergil's question while they are xxxx, hehehe, well she like to curse on Verg, but in the end she.........with him, hahaha!!!

You were right. The hottest one yet. XD Keep it up.

Good God Almighty that chapter ruled! lol Some of the sentences make me cry with laughter like for e.g. 'his finger played with the soft tissue there and he chuckled wickedly' i do that except chuckle wickedly.....in fact i don't even chuckle lol.(again im talking about me doing this to my girlfriend, not me) oh & this bit ruled aswell 'Very slowly he pulled back, then rammed himself in again, nearly climaxing and after slow agonizing movements, discovered to his own surprise that he was about to spill his seed. He pulled out in time to pour hot white thick liquid on her perspired skin; baptizing her with his cum.' lol haha Damn thats hilarious! cool chapter, V!

I'd kill him if I was lady. Heheh joking, of course not!! Steamy and HOT chapter that was........are you planning to have the next one?? I'm interested to see IF Vergil saw Dante fucked her......kinda jealous I guess....

damn!!! i think this is the best chapter yet!!! you know what i'm gonna say.......horny......=^^= i love it

what a place to stop!!!!!
Hot. ;)