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May 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
“Oh fuck, I’m going to loose it inside you if you don’t stop.” ---why didn't u just take it out then, retard?!
"YOU came inside me, demon." she said with accusation.' --Fuckin bastard! wat did i say? NOT cum in her..but NOO he didn't listen. Thats the downfall of the chapter.....err the..err......upfall (if that makes sense) is that the chapter was short! So 50/50 V, lol. I stand corrected abt da condoms, Iesha! You see da scariest thing is she doesn't even work at da nhs n/m go there weekly....wats even more scary is that its no surprise 2 me she knows that kinda crap!
"YOU came inside me, demon." she said with accusation.' --Fuckin bastard! wat did i say? NOT cum in her..but NOO he didn't listen. Thats the downfall of the chapter.....err the..err......upfall (if that makes sense) is that the chapter was short! So 50/50 V, lol. I stand corrected abt da condoms, Iesha! You see da scariest thing is she doesn't even work at da nhs n/m go there weekly....wats even more scary is that its no surprise 2 me she knows that kinda crap!
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May 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Definitely one of your best. Short and to the point...so to speak. But all the heat and emotion came through.
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May 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh, Lady just had someone unload inside her for the first time, I like that! I like that a lot. And it's nice to see you listen to your fans, Veronica. All of your little pieces here are very well written, too.
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May 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is some great stuff! I was like, looking for some hot stories, and I found them, here! I got hard just reading this thing without even trying, its that good. Very descriptive, but not boring, its like being there, or something. Great work, keep it up, not that I'll need anything new for a while, but still, don't stop now!
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May 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow, this was intense
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May 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
HOLY SHIT!! WOWZERS!! Sexay.. *drools*
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May 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
WOW! This was an amazing chapter! It was so damn HOT!! I love the way you describe all the wonderful things that Vergil is doing to Lady, and the description is great , I love it when its really graphic like this - gets some great images in my head and reminds me of all the great things I'm getting...really gets my juices flowing, lol. Vergil is SO amazing, SO SEXY! I wanna get fucked like that, so hard that it makes me scream in ecstasy!
Oh by the way Hamza, you don't just get the normal condoms from the NHS, you can also get the extra wide bigger ones, the narrower smaller ones (not that you'll ever need them), the sensitive ones for people with sensitive skin, as well as the ribbed ones! Quite a big variation, so you'll never get bored lol. There's also the ultra-strong ones, just in case you're getting a bit too rough!
Oh by the way Hamza, you don't just get the normal condoms from the NHS, you can also get the extra wide bigger ones, the narrower smaller ones (not that you'll ever need them), the sensitive ones for people with sensitive skin, as well as the ribbed ones! Quite a big variation, so you'll never get bored lol. There's also the ultra-strong ones, just in case you're getting a bit too rough!
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May 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hehehe, thanx for your beta...did a great job. This certainly a romantic chapter. Pls keep updating.
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April 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
WOW! Holy shit! That was... amazing! *glomps*
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April 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Nice first chapter. As I've said before: your writing has incredible atmosphere. Onward...