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August 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
UPDATE FASTER DAMMIT!!! I love this STORY!!!!
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July 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
^_~
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July 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Haha this one is just like you said it was: Naughty! Never though Vergil had a perverted mind. *evades al the rotten fruit and vegetables thrown at him by fangirls* Ok, I think I got to go now! Bye!!
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July 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Very good. Well-detailed and uhm... I don't know what to say! It's just vééééry juicy!
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July 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I read all 6 and I love them there all great! Each one has its own inspiring sex appeal, which makes it great!
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May 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
loved the latest chapter, mate! very detailed, very gorgeous writing! ^^ well done. *Jester-esque clapping* invite me to that party sometime! ~Dante S.
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May 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Well, that was something a little different. I mean, all your chapters in this have passion but this one had outright lust on a whole new level. It was cool, it had a different feel and your switching POV trick made both characters so damn sexy in each others eyes, clever. You did pretty well bringing their passion to life, like their disbelief of how good it felt, that was described very well, and so was Lady's lust in the beginning, hah, I had no idea girls could throb with desire like that too.
On a side note, is it me or does this huge text box coupled with the tiny font size seem designed to make reviewers feel inadaquate unless they type a lot?
Anyway, it was very good overall, if I have to pick out some flaws, the only thing I could think of is the handcuffs and blindfold seemed to come and go without explanation, or if they were there it was difficult to tell and for how long. For example I could be wrong, but when Lady took control it didn't seem like she was blindfolded and handcuffed then, but I don't know when they came off (if the cuffs ever went on, I don't think they did). Anyway, these are minor points because I heard somewhere a balanced review is the most helpful thing an author can get, although if you ask me a winning lottery ticket would be more helpful 9 times out of 10, but now I'm wandering from the topic. So, in conclusion, a very lustful and intense piece which was a lot of fun to read, and hardly any shortcomings (pun?), great work, and don't stop anytime too soon.
On a side note, is it me or does this huge text box coupled with the tiny font size seem designed to make reviewers feel inadaquate unless they type a lot?
Anyway, it was very good overall, if I have to pick out some flaws, the only thing I could think of is the handcuffs and blindfold seemed to come and go without explanation, or if they were there it was difficult to tell and for how long. For example I could be wrong, but when Lady took control it didn't seem like she was blindfolded and handcuffed then, but I don't know when they came off (if the cuffs ever went on, I don't think they did). Anyway, these are minor points because I heard somewhere a balanced review is the most helpful thing an author can get, although if you ask me a winning lottery ticket would be more helpful 9 times out of 10, but now I'm wandering from the topic. So, in conclusion, a very lustful and intense piece which was a lot of fun to read, and hardly any shortcomings (pun?), great work, and don't stop anytime too soon.
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May 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
(whistles)
Wow! How on earth do you think of these things? It's so kinky! But you know that; I told you already! XD
I can see what's so different, you've used first person perspective. Isn't that like, a very VERY difficult thing to do? Especially for a scene such as this? I thought writing a first person battle scene was hard enough when I did it, but this? (whistles again) woah
Wow! How on earth do you think of these things? It's so kinky! But you know that; I told you already! XD
I can see what's so different, you've used first person perspective. Isn't that like, a very VERY difficult thing to do? Especially for a scene such as this? I thought writing a first person battle scene was hard enough when I did it, but this? (whistles again) woah
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May 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
How she returned vergil? I would like to know.... pls update
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May 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Damn...that got quite a reaction...lady is SO hot...This devil boy doesn't have a chance...