rate_review Reviews

Veronica! Shame on you for cutting it off right before the real fun began, though! You tease... have some mercy on people after warming them up like that. Or is that just to make sure your unsuspecting victims come back for more? Very well written, you've always written well but I can see you're making a lot of progress too. I'd almost say you've had some experience of your own being devoured by leering eyes from the sound of it. *wink* But so has any girl I guess.

You are so far the best writer of fanfiction which features Lady. She almost takes up 3/4 of the whole story. Really good detail here and there.

THANK YOU SOOOOOOOO MUCH!!! I LOVE YOU!!!!!!! **sobbing**

Can't wait for the next chap....

Weeh! Write a second part to this. Me Like. ^-^

(eyes widen as she continues reading. Looks up at you hopefully) Is there going to be more, mon amie?

Well, yet again I'm at a loss for words. It appealed, yes, and I couldn't see very many mistakes. :P Er...er...

Oh I'm hopeless at reviewing!

mmmm....too hot. How could one not long for more when you've got us to this fevered point??? So WHO gets to be first???

I liked this one actually! and for the first time EVER, i read it from beggining to end WITHOUT skipping to the sex scenes lol (i should be f*ckin rewarded or that!...seein as im a 'lameman' lol) Some quotes made me laugh; “I was trying to seduce you two and I’m not good at it alright!?” lol from that quote ALONE you can tell shes a vigin lol However, when i read "She gritted her teeth" at THAT moment, i thought she was bein butt-f*cked lol. The sentence afterwards cleared my confusion. Great story V, keep it up!.....Only 1 thing i didn't get.....

“God you’re so sweet, Lady…” As Dante parted his mouth from hers, his eyes bore into hers for a moment, grabbed the breast that was not being mauled by his brother, and the feel of Vergil’s sucking was making her deflowered pussy so wet and hot that she didn’t realize Vergil’s hard member was at the base of her womanhood. “I’ll be first, Dante….” Was all she heard before he nearly pushed in, Dante’s hands pulled her away. She heard the younger twin growl, “Damn you, Vergil….just because you’re the oldest.”

......So...did they do it or what?

WOW, this was definitely one of your hottest stories so far. Damn it, now you made me a bit horny

*jaw drops* wow...that was hot

Whoa, OK, I just can't help myself, I'm turned on now :o. That was just, wow, that was one of the most lustful things I've ever read without it breaking down into senselessness. At first it was just promising and kinda funny, but once you had those three together, man did you turn the heat up fast! Usually when people write these things they exaggerate certain things, measurements being a favourite, but arousal is quite common too, however this time, I think I could actually believe how wet Lady was, being a virgin, with these two, if I was a woman I think I'd be that wet myself, haha XD! This was a really enticing read, and a brilliant tribute to the arts of build-up and anticipation 8).