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by jaygoose

person ZombieDuke(not logged in)
schedule May 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I think you've doomed me for life. I'll never be able to look at a cup of coffee again and NOT think of Daxter talking dirty to the gods of caffinee. Although the image of Jak in 'secret agent' clothing is a very sweet image in deed.

Update soon please!!!
person Z.V.
schedule April 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
KICKASS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
person ZombieDuke(can\'t remember password at the moment)
schedule April 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
AAAAAAAAAARRRRRRRRRRGGGGGGGGGHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Lovely chapter as always^_^
Dark Jak/Normal Jak/Light Jak. I hadn't really thought that there was a Light Jak persona, but after today, whenever I see light Jak running around, I'm gonna think: 'Damn, I wonder if there's a thing called 'light kink'.'
Even though the ending was completely and utterly cruel (and I can't wait for more light Jak), I love it. It really made my day.
person ZombieDuke(Faro to lazy/tired to sign in)
schedule April 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I've grown weary to OC's and with just cause, but Davies is starting to grow on me, almost akin to a sponge, a hung over sponge but a sponge non the less. I'm dying to see Jak and Dax in the field with these runts, it sounds so good>:]
schedule April 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
No way in hell does this suck, in fact, I'm rubbing my hands together with glee!
Fucking hell, this is good. Sweet writing, twisted characters, a plot that's gonna leave me grinning/dreaming until the next part. You've managed to toss the character's enough angst that they act like they might have been dragged, kicking and screaming from the game world.
Hmmm, Jak and Daxter *drools*
person Anon
schedule April 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This fic did NOT suck, and tge OOCness was within tolerable levels. update soon, or Ill send a million flames rocketing toward your hard drive. Capiche'?