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December 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oooh, I really loved reading this! My favourite pairing (JxD ;P) written to perfection! ^o^ I hope you'll continue this some day *puppy-eyes* :3
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October 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story and Davis *grin* is he a pyromaniac or something? Seriously though, I love his style and his attitude. You just can't help but feel sorry for his partner though. Your views of Jak's alter egos are just amazing especially LightJak, I swear I was tingling from that description.
Great work, more! The ottsels order more! Well, the kitsune maybe either way.
MORE!!
Great work, more! The ottsels order more! Well, the kitsune maybe either way.
MORE!!
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August 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
*Blinks* I like this a lot.
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February 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
WOW. this story is so amazing... i just got into the jak fandom, so i'm just catching up on everything. (all of your stories are amazing, by the way) but i absolutely love this! i'musually not on for OCs, but you blend them in perfectly.
also, i really love how indepth your descriptions of jak's light/dark trnasformations are. and how dax is affected by it too. i love that light can communicate w/ dax..
there's so much more to this story that i absolutely love, but i can't even explain it without going all completely fan-girl on you.. which would be a little creepy. i'll just say i can't wait for the next chapter, and that you are an amazing writer.
(and hopefully you'll read this... i noticed u haven't updated on here for awhile...)
also, i really love how indepth your descriptions of jak's light/dark trnasformations are. and how dax is affected by it too. i love that light can communicate w/ dax..
there's so much more to this story that i absolutely love, but i can't even explain it without going all completely fan-girl on you.. which would be a little creepy. i'll just say i can't wait for the next chapter, and that you are an amazing writer.
(and hopefully you'll read this... i noticed u haven't updated on here for awhile...)
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November 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
YOU ARE SO MEAN.
What kind of ending is that?!
*stutter...stutter...no actual words heard*
Ugh.
*;)* Of course I loved it. It was very good, even the new characters that you've got going. I love Davis and Vergil. *sigh*
More now. Thank you.
What kind of ending is that?!
*stutter...stutter...no actual words heard*
Ugh.
*;)* Of course I loved it. It was very good, even the new characters that you've got going. I love Davis and Vergil. *sigh*
More now. Thank you.
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October 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMFG THAT WAS GOOD!!!
I love Davis and Vergil! They're like this, super pair of demonic-eco-screw ups-that-always-manage-to-save-the-day!
It's sweeeeeeeeet!
But alas, poor Dax and Jak! I feel for them both! *drools over uniform Jak*
Wonderful chapter! *clicks back button to re-read it*
I love Davis and Vergil! They're like this, super pair of demonic-eco-screw ups-that-always-manage-to-save-the-day!
It's sweeeeeeeeet!
But alas, poor Dax and Jak! I feel for them both! *drools over uniform Jak*
Wonderful chapter! *clicks back button to re-read it*
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October 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love the story so far and I like how your chapters are so long.
Keep up the good work!
Keep up the good work!
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August 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Lovely fic you have here. Please continue writing more. ^_^
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July 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
The normal day-to-day lives of the people of Haven city, that was good XD
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June 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Awwww...another ficcie for me to nag you about. *prods* Get to work missy.
*is happy to finally be able to read ficcie*
I love Daxter. And Jak. And the whole Dark/Light Jak thing you've got going on here. I loved all of it. And (as usual) I am not put off by your original character.
*is happy to finally be able to read ficcie*
I love Daxter. And Jak. And the whole Dark/Light Jak thing you've got going on here. I loved all of it. And (as usual) I am not put off by your original character.