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... my god this is a pathetic piece of crap.

Yoko seems rather weird to me. I guess it's because I'm a total "no-made-up-characters-allowed" kinda person...and plus...she's interrupting the love between sora and riku...so that irks me as well...This is an interesting story, though.

alrighty...I hate to flame, but your cutting scenes and confessions of life tragedies is pissing me off. I've had things like Yoko's happen to me and I hate it when people play it off to be this "shrug of the shoulder" shit. I mean, a person who has been raped, or has had their parents or boyfriend kill themselves would not act the way she acts at all. I've had some shit, but I wouldn't go tell it to anybody. My best friend for 14 years doesn't even know about the incidents or all the times I've cut. It's just too rushed. You've pushed these characters too far.
P.s. that Grudge thing in the middle for Yoko's past was unrealistic and a bit idiotic. You have all these real life situations then you go and add that...

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