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August 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This is by far the best Kindom Hearts fic I have ever read! It is so well written. Grammer, spelling, wording are all superb.I always wondered what would happen if Sora and Riku hadn't been seperated during the swallowing of Destiny Island and this is a great way for it to happen. You are a genius. No a goddess in the KH fanfiction arena. I bow to your superior writing abilities. This is such a beautiful story, please please please please finish it. Please!!!
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June 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love the emotion you've put into this, not to mention the concept of the story as I have always wanted to read a fic where they stay together. I have only two things to critisize and those are the length; it should be a lot longer, especially with a chapter you're going to part into two, and that you put that scene with the girls in. This story is about Riku and Sora, even if I like FFX-2, I don't really give - pardon my words - a flying shit about them in this story. Other than that, I love your cutie!Sora and posessive!Riku - they're just the way I like them. But beaware, don't make Sora into an idiot. He's not - innocent maybe, but not stupid. And I'm wondering why none of the people brought up the similarity of Riku and Rikku's names o.O Update soon.
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May 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
UPDATE ASAP!!! Me lovey this story sssssssssoooooooooooo much!!!! :D
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April 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Awesome Story! I hope you'll continue writing, this story!! ^.^ Please keep writing!!
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April 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Kaikao: Cool ficy!!
Reion: *Nods head in agreement* Yeah! Here-*Hands out moofins* It's a lovely first fic. ^^
Kaikao: Update soon. ^^
Reion: *Nods head in agreement* Yeah! Here-*Hands out moofins* It's a lovely first fic. ^^
Kaikao: Update soon. ^^
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April 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
pretty interesting so far! i always wanted to hear a story of if sora got swept away with riku instead of the game where they were seperated. =)
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April 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Update!!!!! :D
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April 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really like where you are going with this. Keep it up. I can't wait to see where this is headed.
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April 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I like it. A very nice opening by suddenly thrusting the reader into the plot... very good! XD I hope you update soon. If you need a beta, I'd be happy to volunteer!
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April 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I like it. I haven't seen any fics where this is done. I really like how you had riku promise to not let Sora go:) Keep up the good work!