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for Vergil's Bad Boy

by Sapphirexkat2

person Siarra
schedule June 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I don't think it can be said that you're lazy. This is a well written fic and quite frankly it's great the way it is. You managed to play through the fight scene well and the part that should've been is done with equal skill and description. The fact that it lacked the dirty goodness didn't hinder the story, in fact the soft ending was very lovely. In fact I found myself smiling and going "Awww". In a suitable manner, of course. It's not appropriate to go all cutey on such wonderful characters.
person zeynel
schedule April 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
cute, I love it!!! ^^
person Seeker
schedule April 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I liked that alot! And I agree thats what should have happened! Dante and Vergil fighting is cool, intense and sexy but wrong if they just want to kill the other, they should work toward the same goals though...we should all know by now that won't happen! (Sighes) The twins must make everything soo much harder than it has to be but maybe thats what keeps us all coming back for more and gives those of us that write the inspiration too! Great fic!
~Seeker
person Aleiah
schedule April 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You put at the bottom that you were lazy, but for someone lazy, your fic was very good. Very detailed. I could see the fight and conclusion in my mind. Since you kept it simple than perhaps you could make a dirtier one later (smile). Liked the fic very much!
person Dante
schedule April 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
mmmmnnngghh...^^ makes me all warm n fuzzy inside! keep it up babe, you belong to the genre!