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July 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hmm! Very cool! I always wanted to see a good lemon with this pairing. Adding a vampiric edge to Flea is a creative idea I wouldn't have considered myself, but I think it suits his character well, especially the way you've written him. I love the extreme you took him to concerning his Chaos magic as well. Good grammar, good descriptions. Overall, very good! Hope you write more! ^_^
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May 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I can't believe no one has reviewed this yet. This is a fantastic story full of lemony goodness ^_^ I just love the way you portray Flea and Magus..and YAY for someone writing a fic with Magus w00t! I loved his character in CT. And Flea is so deliciously naughty you write him so well!