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by Ikkun

person Hotaru
schedule April 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
cool story
person Nico-Chan
schedule April 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Very, very nice. It's hard to find Link yaoi, unless it's w/ Shiek (who wasn't even a he...) And the guards are smexy. Yay for Shiro!
I'd love to see more. ^^ Link/Shiro power, baby! Please, work more on this pair, it was wonderful.
person ToonMistress (Too lazy to log in)
schedule April 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Not used to those kind of fics, but you pulled it off well! *applauds* And I agree that Link isn't talkitive. The most talking we've ever heard from him in a game is when he screams, pants, moans, or gets hit. So he works perfectly for sex. Plus you did good in using a character no one ever bothers about.
person James
schedule April 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
it's good but too bad Shotokan is also Sub-Zero's fighting style in Mortal Kombat
person nn
schedule March 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
>< eck i don't like to read shotakon, but this was really interesting.

weird, but tastefully done. original and written well.
person Kriiz
schedule March 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*Sexsex*

I used this as a quick read before going to class. Boy, I just don't know how to take it! It's certainly a good read, the descriptions are delicious, but at the same time it seems slightly unbelieveable. Probably just because I can't picture Shiro doing anything more than standing there, stolid.

As I said, a lovely read. */end sex*
person Stan
schedule March 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Well, i had my doubts, but was well written and the end was so sad. Good Work.