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November 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hey-y! Who says gay sexin' isn't reason enough to make Sheik a seperate character? :3 Though, that's not really the reason why I'm reviewing.
I'm reviewing 'cause I liked your story, and how you did Dark Link, and in hopes that you'll write more and all that fun stuff.
So... Review +1
I'm reviewing 'cause I liked your story, and how you did Dark Link, and in hopes that you'll write more and all that fun stuff.
So... Review +1
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November 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Holy crap that is the best story i've ever read you describe the story so well it sounds like a novel(a very graphic novel)i mean ive never seen a story this well written hope you continue ^_~ peace
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November 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
An incredibly well-written and throughout 'realistic story'. The first one without gay sex I've finished reading here. xD; Yeah, that's the only thing Ihave to say on this, being a rabid yaoi-lover.. But I agree, I have a hard time seeing a fitting moment for that to happen. Still though, it would've been smoldering hot.
Two thumbs up though! Great work!
Two thumbs up though! Great work!
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November 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Another chapter! *so happy!*
You did wonderfully for a fight scene, honest you did. It was just as awesome as everything else. Good job! And honestly, you scared me there a few times. (Examples) Dark Link lost his arm! *gasp* Is he going to die?! ...Navi's wings are broke?! *shock* Will she still be able to fly?! ...Dark's bleeding out! HE'S GOING TO DIEEEEEEE!!!! *wail*.... ^-^'' (Followed closely by)...Yay! He's still alive! Sorta... WH00T!!
And, truth be told, I never quite understood why so many people disliked Navi so much. Yes, I agree she got a little trying at times, like when she'd repeat the same thing over and over sometimes, but I didn't hate her for it. It was just how the game worked. So, I'm happy to hear that a few more people have given the sweet fairy a chance, if only by reading your version of her (which, by the way, is a very AWESOME version of her character). =)
You did wonderfully for a fight scene, honest you did. It was just as awesome as everything else. Good job! And honestly, you scared me there a few times. (Examples) Dark Link lost his arm! *gasp* Is he going to die?! ...Navi's wings are broke?! *shock* Will she still be able to fly?! ...Dark's bleeding out! HE'S GOING TO DIEEEEEEE!!!! *wail*.... ^-^'' (Followed closely by)...Yay! He's still alive! Sorta... WH00T!!
And, truth be told, I never quite understood why so many people disliked Navi so much. Yes, I agree she got a little trying at times, like when she'd repeat the same thing over and over sometimes, but I didn't hate her for it. It was just how the game worked. So, I'm happy to hear that a few more people have given the sweet fairy a chance, if only by reading your version of her (which, by the way, is a very AWESOME version of her character). =)
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November 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
SDHGLKJHAKSJDFKDJHDLF. <- loving, encouraging encouragement
You've completely done it again! Left me tense and begging for more. My writing skills pale in comparison to yours. <3<3<3 Please take me under your wing, o mighty one, and teach me the ways of your word-weaving!
I've indirectly promised someone to write a slashfic involving Kafei and Link......... I am inevitably going to draw from this as I do so.
Did you know this fic has it's own tab in my Firefox window? Mmhmm, right on top where I can click whenever I want. I initially put it up there so I could check (once a week) to see if you had updated. SKHGFSHNKLDJK. And then you did. :D XD
I ask, nay, beg of you to IM me or e-mail me sometime. I would dearly love to get acquainted with you and worship you properly. ;o;
Please, PLEASE continue. Don't stop writing this! If you don't finish I'm going to have to, and it won't be nearly as marvelous as this. D;
<3~
You've completely done it again! Left me tense and begging for more. My writing skills pale in comparison to yours. <3<3<3 Please take me under your wing, o mighty one, and teach me the ways of your word-weaving!
I've indirectly promised someone to write a slashfic involving Kafei and Link......... I am inevitably going to draw from this as I do so.
Did you know this fic has it's own tab in my Firefox window? Mmhmm, right on top where I can click whenever I want. I initially put it up there so I could check (once a week) to see if you had updated. SKHGFSHNKLDJK. And then you did. :D XD
I ask, nay, beg of you to IM me or e-mail me sometime. I would dearly love to get acquainted with you and worship you properly. ;o;
Please, PLEASE continue. Don't stop writing this! If you don't finish I'm going to have to, and it won't be nearly as marvelous as this. D;
<3~
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November 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I TOTALLY HAD SO MUCH MORE WRITTEN. *thrashes, cries, etc.*
I forget what it all was now, too. ;-; Moar of me begging for you to finish at the expense of my sanity, more of my utter WORSHIP and fangirling, and me begging you to email me sometime so we can get to know each other in my hopes that some of your fantastic writing skills with rub off on me. Because mine pale in comparison to yours T~T
Obligatory squee! Dark Dark Dark, I love me some Dark. And NO! The only love he has for Ganondorf is the sort-of love a child has for a superior that he worships; he has the strongest need to please and to make him proud. Like in Ender's Shadow. Bean just wants to be noticed by Ender, praised by him. It's not an Oedipus complex or anything. ...Because I say so? XD I don't know. That's what I get from the story anyway. x:
ANYWAY. I have indirectly promised a friend of mine that I'd write her a Kafei x Link slashfic... and I will most definitely be tapping this fic as a resourse.
oh and also did you know this fic has it's very own tab in MAI FIREFOX BROWSER? mmhmm it does oh yes it's true. I added it in hopes you'd update it, and I checked it once a week~. And reread it more than once. XD
This is long and email like, yech.
Write more, s'il vous plait!
I forget what it all was now, too. ;-; Moar of me begging for you to finish at the expense of my sanity, more of my utter WORSHIP and fangirling, and me begging you to email me sometime so we can get to know each other in my hopes that some of your fantastic writing skills with rub off on me. Because mine pale in comparison to yours T~T
Obligatory squee! Dark Dark Dark, I love me some Dark. And NO! The only love he has for Ganondorf is the sort-of love a child has for a superior that he worships; he has the strongest need to please and to make him proud. Like in Ender's Shadow. Bean just wants to be noticed by Ender, praised by him. It's not an Oedipus complex or anything. ...Because I say so? XD I don't know. That's what I get from the story anyway. x:
ANYWAY. I have indirectly promised a friend of mine that I'd write her a Kafei x Link slashfic... and I will most definitely be tapping this fic as a resourse.
oh and also did you know this fic has it's very own tab in MAI FIREFOX BROWSER? mmhmm it does oh yes it's true. I added it in hopes you'd update it, and I checked it once a week~. And reread it more than once. XD
This is long and email like, yech.
Write more, s'il vous plait!
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November 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
poor dark link...
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November 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This is a good fic - more like what fanfiction.net used to be like before it was entirely flooded by crap from fools who chose to post mindless and incoherent drabble. I look forward to reading on.
Kate
Kate
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November 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Dragon,
It's so weird that I woke up this morning and, for no real reason at all, thought about this fic. Then this afternoon, I go online and find your lovely review! Thanks for taking the time to write me something so touching.
Truthfully, Dragon -- and all my readers, for that matter -- I've been stuck. Chapters five and six literally wrote themselves, and then I stumbled into chapter seven. I started it three times before putting it not even on the back burner but on the counter accross the kitchen. School has been tough so far this semester, but I think a break may be coming up soon... I may get to finish this chapter yet!
Anyone who's read my work before knows that this is far from being over. Once I coreograph a fight scene, then I can get back into the less-stressful story-weaving aspect of my writing.
And of course you can do as much fanart of To Be Real as you would like! That goes for everyone, just be sure you credit me if you post it online. My artwork can be found at kriiz.deviantart.com and I do have ... oh, I think ONE measly (old) doodle of Dark as he appears in this story. I really need to do some more!
Anyway, thank you Dragon, and thank all of you for your reviews. It's your feedback that's giving me the impetus to keep going!
Kriiz <3
It's so weird that I woke up this morning and, for no real reason at all, thought about this fic. Then this afternoon, I go online and find your lovely review! Thanks for taking the time to write me something so touching.
Truthfully, Dragon -- and all my readers, for that matter -- I've been stuck. Chapters five and six literally wrote themselves, and then I stumbled into chapter seven. I started it three times before putting it not even on the back burner but on the counter accross the kitchen. School has been tough so far this semester, but I think a break may be coming up soon... I may get to finish this chapter yet!
Anyone who's read my work before knows that this is far from being over. Once I coreograph a fight scene, then I can get back into the less-stressful story-weaving aspect of my writing.
And of course you can do as much fanart of To Be Real as you would like! That goes for everyone, just be sure you credit me if you post it online. My artwork can be found at kriiz.deviantart.com and I do have ... oh, I think ONE measly (old) doodle of Dark as he appears in this story. I really need to do some more!
Anyway, thank you Dragon, and thank all of you for your reviews. It's your feedback that's giving me the impetus to keep going!
Kriiz <3
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November 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I am so very, VERY happy. ^w^
Before, I had been so very, very sad. When I first came across this fic, only 2 chapters had been written, and there had been such a gap in the last update time compared to that day. I'd mourned the apparent loss of such a promising story; No offense to you, Great Kriiz, but I had thought it to be abandoned! After heaving a sad sigh, I had moved on, thinking never to come across this jewel again...
And yet, low and behold, a return to the fandom again to find, not only did the story still breathe, it had grown a full four chapters! Nearly complete, in all its glory! You have lifted my heart!
It has turned out just as wonderful as I had hoped/dreamed. You have done a better job at putting this fic together then a few professional authors that I have read lately have done. Bravo to you! =D
I must admit, I am one of the people that enjoy Sheik as a seperate character, but also, I only like it where it is a plausible and believable situation. Still, I applaude your choice to keep things as canon as possible here, and managing it so well.
I hope that you are updating again soon (I will be checking back regularily this time), seeing as it looks that the next may very well be the last chapter. If that is so, would there be an epilogue coming as well, if Dark manages to survive? Maybe even, hope of hopes, a sequel? I admit another thing, I'm a sucker for the happy ending. Dark learning to lead a peaceful, happy life with Mother!Uula in Kakariko sounds too sweet for words. Romance for the people maybe too? One can only hope... *crosses fingers*
PS -- I am currently TOTALLY inspired. With your permission, Kriiz, can I snag your Dark Link for some fanarts? >)
Before, I had been so very, very sad. When I first came across this fic, only 2 chapters had been written, and there had been such a gap in the last update time compared to that day. I'd mourned the apparent loss of such a promising story; No offense to you, Great Kriiz, but I had thought it to be abandoned! After heaving a sad sigh, I had moved on, thinking never to come across this jewel again...
And yet, low and behold, a return to the fandom again to find, not only did the story still breathe, it had grown a full four chapters! Nearly complete, in all its glory! You have lifted my heart!
It has turned out just as wonderful as I had hoped/dreamed. You have done a better job at putting this fic together then a few professional authors that I have read lately have done. Bravo to you! =D
I must admit, I am one of the people that enjoy Sheik as a seperate character, but also, I only like it where it is a plausible and believable situation. Still, I applaude your choice to keep things as canon as possible here, and managing it so well.
I hope that you are updating again soon (I will be checking back regularily this time), seeing as it looks that the next may very well be the last chapter. If that is so, would there be an epilogue coming as well, if Dark manages to survive? Maybe even, hope of hopes, a sequel? I admit another thing, I'm a sucker for the happy ending. Dark learning to lead a peaceful, happy life with Mother!Uula in Kakariko sounds too sweet for words. Romance for the people maybe too? One can only hope... *crosses fingers*
PS -- I am currently TOTALLY inspired. With your permission, Kriiz, can I snag your Dark Link for some fanarts? >)