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by Kriiz

schedule November 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Great story! I loved reading it!
schedule February 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh, my, is this story amazing!

You write the 'disturbing scenes' very well, I think. There's always this kind of... odd, gripping feeling that makes me want to read even if I know I'm going to be grossed out.

By the by... did you perhaps get the idea of the parasite baby from the Facehuggers in the Alien series? It's a wonderful idea, I think! Please, do continue! I'm gripped by this story, truly <3

--R.A.Z.B
person darkie's_stalker
schedule January 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
absolutely amazeing, best fic i have read in a long time, certainly the best one about darkie that there is, and im only halfway through it (cant finish reading at the moment because im about to fall asleep on the keyboard...) but this is amazeing.
person TGB
schedule January 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
The ending of your story brought a wave of pent up rage. I was so mad he went back to his own time at the end. More so than when I found out Sheik was, in fact, Zelda. It was a wonderfully written story, all in all. Dark Link was deffinitely my favorite character.
person Anon
schedule December 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
"The harder my ego gets stroked, the more likely my brain is to ejaculate good ideas!" = XD You are, and forever will be, the AWESOME. I love it! XD

You like my play-by-play? Cool, I feel so proud. PBP for this chapter is not as fun, seeing as there isn't really a battle to be shocked about over and over again (^-^''). Basically went like this: Dude, I can SO see Dark at a party like that. *begins to drool* ...Ack! They're going to seriously hurt each other! Where the hell is Navi at at a time like this?! ... OO Okay, they didn't hurt each other too bad. *snicker*... Link, don't go like that! Take Dark with YOUUUUUU! (followed closely by) *wail* I want to give you a hug too Dark! *sob*

The end really wanted to make me cry. At least Uula can be there for Dark when he needs her/comfort. But I was quickly sobered by Anju; that was just ominous. Still, it makes me think that the little Demon-Baby is going to have something to do with Dark getting back to Link somehow. ;) The suspense, I love it! Totally can't wait for the next installment!


I decided I really dislike college exams, even more then usual. Because I was studying, I wasn't able to read this the first day you posted! I grieve!... *wail*
person Dragon
schedule December 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oppsie. I was so into writing you a good review, I forgot to put a name to it. ^-^'' That one up above is me. lol
person wouldnt-u-like-2-no
schedule December 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
plz, PLZ say that means a suqual!
person Nuitari Aquarius
schedule December 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
RAAAAAH !!!!!
Pity ! We want another chapter, that's too cruel to leave us like that ! You should be shameful... !

Of course, it means that you're JUST a great author, and your style has really improved ! Great ! And so... dramatic, beautiful, sad, bloody and... wonderful.
Means you've to write the sequel... fastly.
person Kiyo-chan
schedule December 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OMG! I love this story soooo much! I love the Link/Dark pairing, you have a great plot going, and the detail is wonderful! It's just like reading a REAL book (it'd be great to see it as a graphic novel)! I love this, again, and please please PLEASE continue!!!!!!!!!!!!!
person Blueeyes
schedule November 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This is a great story!! What do you mean about not an yaoi anymore?? I can clearly see where it is between Link and Dark. Please don't stop that!!! I beg you not to. I think they are a great pair believe it or not. Most people don't think that but please carry on with the Link/Dark Link thing please. For me? *Puppy dog face times 10000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000*