AFF Fiction Portal
person capcomfreak4life
schedule April 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ummm... what's the point of this fic?
it's written quite well but it apparently doesn't have much to do with the A in AFF.
i'm not dissin' this was quite good but not much adult material, unless there's going to be more chapters in which case i don't have a problem at all.

best wishes,
capcomfreak4life
person Jennifer
schedule April 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Interesting story, I even like how the title style looks. I hope you continue.