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It's me Dizzietese. I forgot my password for this and my old email account so I made another account. I am in the process of writing my second book and publishing my first. Thanks to your reviews on my Dizzy and Testament I decided to take writing more serious. I am getting a long ways with it. Anyways. I am going to start posting mroe in now. I have a son now so if it takes a long time for me to post something then I am sorry.

I think that this story is very unique and special. How it accurately describes the course of action and the experiences, with accordance to emotion and great precision. I really liked this story, I found it really entertaining and captivating. With its suspense and flow of events, this story excelled in its pattern and content. It was so cool! Lol. X) Can't wait to read the next part.

Great Job!!!!

truly amasing. truly..you are so tallented why didnt u tell me about these earlier. its the best.
Nic XxX

its greanothing left to say

"Thanks Nic." -Blushes- "I did not tell you about these cause like......I did not know you were into it all. Sorry. >_> I will let you know as soon as I post the second chapter up. I write theses at school during class and like.......Then when I am done I come home and type them on here.......My teacher almost caught me. He read the first line on one of the pages and then put it back down. The first line was : 'She moaned slightly as her body was over taken by another orgasm more intense than any she has yet to feel.' He just put it back down and looked at me. XDDDD. It was so funny. I was so red in class." -Sighs- "Anyways Nic. Thanks for the review and thank you everyone else who has reviewed me. That was my first one and I was very afraid of what people may say. Also for those of you who don't know......This exact same story but with different names is under 'Original.' See when I write these I write them as I think of someone I wish to do these things with. I must thank the one who wrote 'Moonlight Embrace.' It inspired me to actually put mine up." -Smiled and left- "Thanks again to you all."

You told me to check it out so I did It is great Nice to see Dizzy and Testament getting so far Poor girl had some pain though

This is okay. I think. I am high and I needed a way to get so I remembered your story and I had to come to it. I want to be a s detailed as that. Keep it all up.

you have a true talent for writing. dont ket anyone tell you any different. i am looking forward to more works from you

This story is so great. It is wonderful It captures the emoions of both Testament and Dizzy. I wish I would have thought of something this well. This story is so detailed it gets me off just reading it. I hope you are making a chapter two to this one.