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May 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Eee! *glomps you* You have made me pleased! I love a seme Sora and uke Riku!! Yay! Huggles!
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April 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was great for your first time. Do another one soon!!!
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April 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
fluff! *squeesighfaintscuddle*
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April 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I broke it up some... I hope it is easier to read. If not I'll try again some time. THanks for the awesome reviews!!! And I never wrote a sex scene before this.. but I have plenty in my head!
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March 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I like it a lot. But could you space out your paragraphs becasue its a little hard to read... it kinda hurt my eyes. If I get blind... -__-... lol anyway it was really good.
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March 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
WOW!!! that was great. You sure that was your first time?
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March 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Loved it, but remember: Short paragraphs are your friend! It's hard to read when everything is bunched together. Why not try pressing enter twice or even just once before and after everytime someone talks?