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for Deadly Triangle

by JADEPRINCESS

person Dante's Angel
schedule January 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
mary sue is your oc is like all perfect and beautiful and stuff like that just ignore people who shout "OH NO IT'S ANOTHER MARY SUE" people like that are just bitches ok...great story keep it up
person Gary STu
schedule January 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Mary Sue and Gary Stu are made up characters who are FLAWLESS, strong, and in everyway perfect and beautiful.

Dont worry about people disliking them. They're the nasty people who can't leave things alone and let people write their fantasies, yet its their fantasies that they want manly-man fantasy but wont allow it for others to write made up characters? Thats the stupidity of it. They can rant and rave and say that its is OOC for mary sue to be with Dante and so on but yet manly-man is?
I’d like to see them get manly-man sex in real life!

People just have to let others write what they want because they are NOT CAPCOM.
Capcom can take this privilege away from us so you keep on writing your story. The ONLY People that can't take DMC characters OOC are the original creators of the series. They allow us to write whatever the hell we want.

I have seen many creators and companies take this privilege away, therefore deleting all the stories people have written and fantasize over.
person foot fetish
schedule January 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
ahehehe

I like your foot comment. You are funny and this rocks.
person cassandra
schedule May 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
if you have beaten mission 5 in DMC 3, i need your help. please send me an email in regards to how or if you defeated the bosses at the end of mission five. please, i need your help, i die within like 2 minutes while im fighting those guys. much love, update soon!
person cassandra
schedule May 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hey great story, i love it, please update soon your killing me. oh and if anyone knows the best way to beat those two twin brother guys in mission 5 of DMC 3 dantes awakening, please e-mail me and tell me. you know where my e-mail is.
person Laina McTiernan
schedule March 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You could use some work in your character development, grammar, and storyline. Other than that, you're doing well. Might I consider that you get yourself a beta reader?
person Laina McTiernan
schedule March 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Sorry about the double review, I just noticed that I forgot to leave my email. ^_^. Feel free to contact me, I'd be more than happy to help you in any way possible. ^_^.
person :(
schedule March 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OH NOEZ!! NOT ANOTHER MARY SUE!!! SHIT SHIT SHIT
person Dante
schedule March 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*laughs* little do you know, babe. alright, so its a great premise, keep it up! ^^ I always make sure to review every great fic out there, an yours is one of them. so, drop me a line, if ya want, and maybe even find out alllll about that first paragraph of your author's note of this story.