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January 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
geat story veeeerrrry nice keep up the excellent story telling
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May 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Sandra and Rain don't SEEM to be Mary-Sue if you ask me. Mary Sues are basically 'oh, i'm so pretty, all the guys want to be with me, i've lived SUCH a happy life'. At least something along those lines. Characters who have troubled pasts don't seem as bad, so don't worry about that. The story isn't bad, but you REALLY need to work on your spelling.
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August 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love this story Don't listen to ppl who say bad things, if they don't like it they don't have to read it......... I love all your stories and I think I have reviewed them all..... :)
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February 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Dont listen to the reviewer who says stay away from cliches because devil may cry and Dante is CLICHE! Dont listen to them about Mary Sues because there are people who write Mary sue and Gary Stu all the time and people love to read them. Do listen to the advise of grammar and spelling though. That will take a you a long way. In the fanfiction world anything goes.
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February 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
My advise; stay away from the cliche's and Mary-Sues. And please check over your grammar and spelling.
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February 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love it so far good job!
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January 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hey the yaoi fangirls are mostly very nice girls ^_^ its only the few who are bitches i think. ^_^
Most of them are very kind and helpful and dont care what you write, but they do care about grammar and stuff,they wont be mean, they'll help out if they can. Just want to post this to defend them because they are mostly very nice.
Most of them are very kind and helpful and dont care what you write, but they do care about grammar and stuff,they wont be mean, they'll help out if they can. Just want to post this to defend them because they are mostly very nice.
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January 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
to Hester = thanx for that I was confused with Gary STus post. Soemthing about OCs being targeted. ^^';
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January 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I know what you mean. How come the yaoi fangirls are so mean to people? Why are they always being mean to other writers who dont write yaoi? dont they remember that not long ago they were spit on in their fandom to write incest? Now with their popularity they become nasty bitches and tell the OC writers to shove it up their ass because they shouldnt write OCs?
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January 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
keep going i want to see your threesome!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!