rate_review Reviews

Interesting...I really liked how you decided not to make the whole thing just turn into smut. It worked well. Keep on with this story. It's worth it to continue.

hey great story but please don't end it there its really good and ending a story for good with a cluff hanger is fuck up

I hate to say this because I've read and liked other things you've written, but...well, this wasn't your best. Towards the end the dialogue got quite awkward, and i got the feeling you were nervous about writing yuri for the first time. However, if you polish this up (because it kind of does read like you wrote it at 3 in the morning, yeah :P) it could be a pretty good piece of fiction.