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for Pleasuring Sins

by AngelofTwilight

person xMiyux
schedule January 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Interesting... But awesome fic, and you added you characters (that's something you hardly see) anyway can't wait for chapter 2 =D
person Anonymous
schedule November 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Interesting ficlet. Slightly ooc though. There are no such things as male Succubus in the sense that they aren't called Succubi, because the term changes to inccubus. The concept exists, but the name is gender specific.
person Shadowwalker
schedule December 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey there, nice ficlet by the way. Loved the joke about the Blade movie!^^ Are you the same person reviewing the fic "the theif and the worrior"? If so do you recognize me? I'm Knuczema.
person Squall Leonhart
schedule December 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I was pleasantly surprised... this is quite well-written. But for future reference... the friend that told you there are male succubi? He's wrong. Succubi are ONLY female. Their male counterparts are inccubi (and I just KNOW I spelled that wrong...). For a famous example of a succubus, see Morrigan or Lillith from the Darkstalkers series.
person ChibiChao13
schedule March 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow! Your Storry is awsome Angel! The yaoiness is cool!


By the way I've updated chapter 6 now! ^_^
person ZOINKS!!!
schedule March 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Succubi are female only. The word you're looking for is incubus, 'cause them d00ds be male.
person Angel_of_Twilight
schedule March 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
actually, there are some male succubus... but they are rare... i forgot to add that in my notes -_-;;

my friend told me so
person Anthromorphic Chao Boy
schedule March 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow your story is awsome! The characters are well written, and the lemon part was...was....HOT!
(runs around like a rabid chao)
I hope you add chapter 2 soon, This fic rocks!!!