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August 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Aw, no, I really liked this. I thought this was very well-written. I love how Zelos' conscience plays with him, and how Colette is just a silent temptress, I thought that was really original and cogent. Sometimes, though, I wish I could've known more about what was going on on Colette's face at times (was she visibly aroused? If she wasn't smiling, what did her eyes tell Zelos, besides their natural color?), and the last sentence just didn't feel satisfying enough somehow. Almost a bit too sweet, actually.
But yeah, I really liked this, and I thought you did a great job. Much better job than I can do while on insomnia, anyway.
But yeah, I really liked this, and I thought you did a great job. Much better job than I can do while on insomnia, anyway.
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December 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Awesome fic dude! This is the best ToS hentai fic I've read!
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January 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This is a very niiiiiiice story. I wish you can continue this story, because this website needs more Zelos x Cloette Fics like this one.
You're doing a nice job ! Keep up the work ! ANd don't be discouraged, this a small community so don't worry if people don't review.
v(^.^)v
You're doing a nice job ! Keep up the work ! ANd don't be discouraged, this a small community so don't worry if people don't review.
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August 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Good Story! *Nods Head*
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July 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Grade A stuff ya got there. *Grabs friends and forces their thumbs up* Nine thumbs for you! ^^;;;;
I liked it a lot, but the ending sort of......well it made me wonder and it made me a little disappointed. I find, for the most part, neither one of those characters get the respect they deserve, and it's good to have people show Zelos in a.......well, a better light than he's usually in. Perverts need love too, you know? ^^
....I have no comment about Colette, though. For some reason.....even though I know she doesn't deserve it......I can't stand her. She annoys me.
Anyway, keep up the good work!
I liked it a lot, but the ending sort of......well it made me wonder and it made me a little disappointed. I find, for the most part, neither one of those characters get the respect they deserve, and it's good to have people show Zelos in a.......well, a better light than he's usually in. Perverts need love too, you know? ^^
....I have no comment about Colette, though. For some reason.....even though I know she doesn't deserve it......I can't stand her. She annoys me.
Anyway, keep up the good work!
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June 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow! I like the Colette/Zelos pairing a whole lot! That was very...different but I enjoyed it.
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March 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great story! I really don't have any complaints that I can think of, and I usually have at least one. Personally, I don't much like the term "load" but that's a personal issue and doesn't really effect the enjoyment of the story any. You write very good smut, and I think you handled what could have potentially been a very sick and twisted situation with a great deal of tact and gentleness. Great fic!
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March 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is really good. Would you consider writing another story?
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March 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow.Nicely done!
5 out of 5!
Could you make another one?
Maybe a Zelos/Yggdrasil?
5 out of 5!
Could you make another one?
Maybe a Zelos/Yggdrasil?