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September 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i absolutely love this story thanks for writing it
and an extra special thanks from Dervishke, Shika and Tracer
(my OC's your story inspired)
and Judas would have been happy to hae me you at the convention
(Judas Intro from chap 2 to trap the dragon
Judas is Jonai's oldest friend the bartending job was court mandated due to public displays of fangirlishness when she broke into a sonic the hedgehog convention took all the chaos and recreated scenes from the movie scream when the police tried to stop her.)
and an extra special thanks from Dervishke, Shika and Tracer
(my OC's your story inspired)
and Judas would have been happy to hae me you at the convention
(Judas Intro from chap 2 to trap the dragon
Judas is Jonai's oldest friend the bartending job was court mandated due to public displays of fangirlishness when she broke into a sonic the hedgehog convention took all the chaos and recreated scenes from the movie scream when the police tried to stop her.)
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February 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hello! Just a humble reviewer here! I love what your doing! But could you do a...wait, let me count...one...uh what comes after one? Can you do a six-some! With everybody! Chaos, Sonic, Knuckles, Espio, Shadow, and Tails? That would be a dream come true! E-mail me to see what you think!
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January 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
uhm i guess i should put this on the last chapter btu i dont feel like it.
even with the aded 50 years shadow wouldnt be 65... he was like a week old when ark was taken over and he was put into stasis.... so just ad seven to the time line of sonic adventure 2 and sonic heros and shadow the hedge hog and you get his age wich is like 1 years old................ lucky bastard i wich i could buy alchohol at 1 years old XD
even with the aded 50 years shadow wouldnt be 65... he was like a week old when ark was taken over and he was put into stasis.... so just ad seven to the time line of sonic adventure 2 and sonic heros and shadow the hedge hog and you get his age wich is like 1 years old................ lucky bastard i wich i could buy alchohol at 1 years old XD
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December 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
The first one made Chaos gay. If I find the person who did this I might kill them.
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December 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Almost 4 months! why is there no update?
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August 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
love the fic, when will 26 be?
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August 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Sorry about the way the fic turned out, Sonikku. I know it didn't met your expectations but I my imagination only limits me to what I know about the characters.
I know their all out of character...(especially Sonic and Chaos), but I try to go with what's on my mind since I'm busy preparing for my Driving test, and working a lot.
The life of a freshman is a hard one... ~_~
P.S.
As for the chao...well...that's kind of another story...at least I only limit it in 2 chapters... ^_^
You can e-mail me at pythagoras772000@yahoo.com if you have any suggestions on how to improve my ficcy...since I'm new at writing fanfiction.
I only started this thing 3 1/2 months ago!
Thank You
I know their all out of character...(especially Sonic and Chaos), but I try to go with what's on my mind since I'm busy preparing for my Driving test, and working a lot.
The life of a freshman is a hard one... ~_~
P.S.
As for the chao...well...that's kind of another story...at least I only limit it in 2 chapters... ^_^
You can e-mail me at pythagoras772000@yahoo.com if you have any suggestions on how to improve my ficcy...since I'm new at writing fanfiction.
I only started this thing 3 1/2 months ago!
Thank You
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August 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This was horribly done, not only did you make sonic sound like a wimp, but also a groveling bitch who submits himself to anyone who gets one hit on him. Come on, Sonic wouldn't go down without a fight, and he sure would say 'alright, you win!' He'd keep fighting until he either won, or died from impact. He'd never let anyone do that to him, and he sure as hell wouldn't beg for it either.
As for Chaos...he's a tragic character, he wouldn't be so fiesty and bold, if he was to try anything he would do it in a mysterious way, or not at all.
The chao? What...the...hell? Since when are chao sexual? *Frightened*
The story itself wasn't well written either, there was barely any description, just 'virgin ass', 'cock', 'dick', 'cum'....come on, the next time you write a fic can you use a little...imagination? We already know what it is, but it's I don't know..charming to say it in more creative ways.
I must say though, I've never read a Chaos/Sonic pairing before, and that was pretty interesting.^_^
As for Chaos...he's a tragic character, he wouldn't be so fiesty and bold, if he was to try anything he would do it in a mysterious way, or not at all.
The chao? What...the...hell? Since when are chao sexual? *Frightened*
The story itself wasn't well written either, there was barely any description, just 'virgin ass', 'cock', 'dick', 'cum'....come on, the next time you write a fic can you use a little...imagination? We already know what it is, but it's I don't know..charming to say it in more creative ways.
I must say though, I've never read a Chaos/Sonic pairing before, and that was pretty interesting.^_^
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August 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ok um.. The last two reviews that 'I' posted was actually my sisters. She hacked into my account. -.-;
Anyway, It's good to see you updated. I'm liking this story a lot. ^_^
Anyway, It's good to see you updated. I'm liking this story a lot. ^_^
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July 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You're BAAACK!! XD *squees* Oh my god, the trio of japanese girls sound just like me and my fangirl friends. XD And Omocho got his own little section in the chapter!! ^___^ *ish teh happy* He's, like, my favorite character in this fic. XD