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My god, its well writtten and actually erotic!

that was great pease continue it. i am realy amazed.

Very nicely done. I throughly enjoyed it. Keep the next chapter coming!

This was great! Lei Fang/Hitomi is great... I look forward to the next installment.

I approve! Very sensual--it was extremely well done.

Awesome, you got a good writing style..please continue!

Very nice, good diction and very well written, hope to see a part 2 to this!
I hope I can write like this someday

Well! Hitomi and Leifang are my favorite girl-girl couple, and I´m very disappointed that there´s so little material with them, but of all the stories I´ve read (3 and a half so far, including yours) yours reigns supreme in my opinion. I´m just a little unhappy with Hitomi fantasizing about boys as well, but that´s because I´m a H&L-purist, in my mind she only has eyes for Leifang, it´s just a personal preference and hasn´t got anything to do with the quality of the story. As for the story, I find it very wellwritten, descriptive and, of course, hot. Hitomi might seem a bit more "open" than I imagine her (I write her as being more shy about sex and sexuality), but to each their own. I very much look forward to your next installment, and hope that it will be about Hitomi and Leifang, when do you expect to have it ready?

Yours
Jeppe Cleve.

That is soooooo hot. Hitomi is sooo hot. Lei-fang is as hot as Kasumi, Ayane, and Hitomi.

CONTINUE... I make her fuck with Lei-fang!!!

Tenshi

damn! your story is hot! please continue! you have a great skill! i love how you went nice and slow and didn't rush through the chapter! all that remains for is for you to update! please! hurry!